(AFWC) Zazzbot: Going Rogue

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posted on Jan, 1 2010 @ 01:00 PM
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Can I have the last 10 minutes of my life back
Just kidding ...




posted on Jan, 1 2010 @ 01:22 PM
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"The internet wasn't created for mockery, it was supposed to help researchers at different universities share data sets." - HS



That said ... very nicely done zazz.


[edit on 1 Jan 2010 by schrodingers dog]



posted on Jan, 1 2010 @ 01:26 PM
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Great story, Zass...

Only one thing...

Where'm I? *pouting* I thought we were friends? *pouting*

J/K. More, more.



posted on Jan, 1 2010 @ 01:43 PM
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When is the part where I come in and save every ones butt?



seriously,I love it zazz. Hope you write more.



posted on Jan, 1 2010 @ 01:54 PM
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OK is that an invitation?
I may just have to roll up my sleeves and jump in soon.

S & F



posted on Jan, 1 2010 @ 02:04 PM
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You have some intimate knowledge of some of the posters here. Impressive writing too.

Keep it up



posted on Jan, 1 2010 @ 02:13 PM
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Might be fun to do a collaborative. Slay, you would HAVE to have tons, and tons of authority. (You're that kind of guy). But one of your first acts would need be to take that beer away from OZ, and for God's sake, get those atomic wings out of S-Dog's possession. They are changing him.....into some kind of mutant. (Shame, Zazz, shame).

Oh--- the title alone merits a S&F! How very clever.



posted on Jan, 1 2010 @ 02:46 PM
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The Tenth Power is having a coffee with Angelina Jolie, they are comparing adopted babies, he thinks he's finally over taken her count with his Korea acquisition


Zazz...you owe me a new monitor...

I heart you like a room full of weight watchers look at pizza..

Muah!

~Keeper



posted on Jan, 1 2010 @ 02:54 PM
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I was laughing so hard it was like watching Mutters, the new drama hour.

Now all you need is sound effects.

Then you can take it to ATS News as a new Conspiracom (Sit Com).

Michael Winslow - Tennis Game


[edit on 1-1-2010 by SpartanKingLeonidas]



posted on Jan, 1 2010 @ 03:02 PM
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The vegans killed me? WTF!?!?!?!

Loved the story, frazzle.....


-Dev



posted on Jan, 1 2010 @ 03:11 PM
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Thx Peeps, I agree with piddles, this story is crap! LOL

Anyhoo, If could be arsed to give another 30 mins of my life to a part 2, others like Serbsta, SKL, Seagull GEL and GST will make an appearance ofc...GST, we do need a replacent metrosexual Texan afterall


I apologise again profusly for this silly story, It was written in a New Year Day Severe hangover.....DTs and all.



[edit on 1-1-2010 by zazzafrazz]



posted on Jan, 1 2010 @ 03:13 PM
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Originally posted by zazzafrazz


"Blup Blup here and ready to kick some arse commander!"

"Blups, can you not dress in just a loin cloth when we do this, and take off those ridiculous angel wings, Gay Mardi Gras is in March



cheers Zazz


Cool story


[edit on 1/1/10 by blupblup]



posted on Jan, 1 2010 @ 03:14 PM
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Originally posted by zazzafrazz
Thx Peeps, I agree with piddles, this story is crap! LOL

Anyhoo, If could be arsed to give another 30 mins of my life to a part 2, others like Serbsta and GST will make an appearance ofc...GST, we do need a replacent metrosexual Texan afterall


I apologise again profulsy for this silly story, It was written in a New Year Day Severe hangover.....DTs and all.


So, basically you are saying that we need to send a round of drinks to you in order to get your creative juices flowing in order to produce us another work of art


Im sure something can be arranged



posted on Jan, 1 2010 @ 03:16 PM
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PUI ing has always been my forte



posted on Jan, 1 2010 @ 03:16 PM
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Originally posted by zazzafrazz
Thx Peeps, I agree with piddles, this story is crap! LOL

GST will make an appearance ofc...GST, we do need a replacent metrosexual Texan afterall




You are so banned!


Kidding of course.

As long as I am the main character and the hero I am just fine.



posted on Jan, 1 2010 @ 03:17 PM
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BTW I love that the creative writing forum has a top threads bulletin at the moment...More writters pls join the fun!! Come and put me to shame!!! Though I shame myself daily, you can all finish the job.

[edit on 1-1-2010 by zazzafrazz]



posted on Jan, 1 2010 @ 03:17 PM
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Originally posted by zazzafrazz
Thx Peeps, I agree with piddles, this story is crap! LOL

Anyhoo, If could be arsed to give another 30 mins of my life to a part 2, others like Serbsta, SKL, Seagull GEL and GST will make an appearance ofc...GST, we do need a replacent metrosexual Texan afterall


I apologise again profusly for this silly story, It was written in a New Year Day Severe hangover.....DTs and all.



[edit on 1-1-2010 by zazzafrazz]


Now, zazzafrazzles, your story was awesome, and unique, and pulled a lot of ATS/BTS into it.

Do not let one negative person, someone who has no idea what goes on in Mutters, get you siding with them.

Lots of love babe, and Happy New Year, now start on part two.

~Hugz zazzafrazzles tight~



posted on Jan, 1 2010 @ 03:19 PM
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No I am quite happy for constructive criticism, and indeed that was a fair call



posted on Jan, 1 2010 @ 03:20 PM
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Originally posted by SpartanKingLeonidas


~Hugz zazzafrazzles tight~


I hear hugging your zazzafrazzle is illegal in some parts of the world...


Wow, who said that? Not me!



I agree though, I want part 2! And part 3 and 4 as well!



[edit on 1-1-2010 by gimme_some_truth]



posted on Jan, 1 2010 @ 03:23 PM
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Originally posted by zazzafrazz
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No I am quite happy for constructive criticism, and indeed that was a fair call



Sweetheart, darl, lovely Aussie lady, there's a fine line between constructive criticism, and complete negativity.

Check out how many people have flagged and starred your thread, over one person poo-pooing it.

Really darl, I loved it, I do not spend enough time in the Short Stories forums.

Your story was top notch.

No arguing with me, I see your talent come out to play in these threads.

So does everyone else.


Besides, you're not on the ATS side enough, BTS has too much of you.

Love seeing you here, Short Stories, or otherwise.





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