posted on Jun, 12 2012 @ 10:34 PM
Even if we cut that number in half.. say half just moved in with friends and family that's still Leaves over 13 million...
You know, learning proper grammar would make your sentences more fun to read. There should be at least something between "family" and "that's".
Also, why is the word "Leaves" capitalized?
to be fair lets cut that number in half again... 6.5 millom is still a lot of folks, mostly childrent too
For a thread-starter post, this is really messed up. "MILLOM"? Really? And "CHILDRENT"? Child-rent? What are you trying to say?
Sentences are supposed to begin with a capital letter, commas should be used in their proper places, and so on.
Sorry to make this an english / grammar lesson, but others are probably not going to give it to you, and you really need it. Besides, I am always glad
when someone corrects me, because it gives me an opportunity to improve. So, I hope that you can also be glad about this, and learn to improve your
At the very least, the thread-starter post should be legible - some random comment I can understand, but the post that starts the whole thread? It's
And one more point: bad grammar creates the impression that the writer is not trustworthy or intelligent. Even if you don't consciously think that,
it's the gut reaction-type impression it cultivates. At least to those, who can somehow manage this easy task..