Great story, I love this style of writing, the true facts wrapped around a fictional story!

(Yay for Matthew Zazz Reilly!)

S & F



Roswell.

[edit on 4/10/2009 by roswell1]

Also English is my second language,

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My hat is off to you! great story!

Really nice story zazz and very well written..

Dont know why you were nervous about posting something its very good, and I look forward to seeing some more of your work in the future..

and, maybe you would want to write in the crypto chronicles too

Just asking lol..

Anyway, have another flag.. thats 32.

Cheers,

JQ.

Well done! The Egyptians have always been a fountain for the creative spirit. The mysteries of the Archaic and Old Kingdom are especially interesting for so many unanswered questions from the period 3100 to 2200 BC.

Little Udit, with her quiet ways, has traversed the millenia to point the way and, as it is the way of the world today, been ignored as the innocent playfulness of a child.

How easily we put aside that old saying, 'out of the mouth of babes'.

Thanks for this brilliant story, zazz.

Missviky, I speak English now as my first language, but not for my first 5 years

John Q... TY the crypto chornicles...hmmm will think about it, but I think I fluked a good story, I am honestly completely shocked, and knocked it out witha few hours to spare before closing. Lets see if the next stories are any good first, before you throw job offers at me

Masqua Thank you. You're encouragment is great, you are a very creative soul