Cry Havoc! - A poem, page 1
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reply posted on 30-9-2009 @ 08:36 PM by jackflap
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I want to put music to it man. This is the bomb! It fills me with an almost rage whereby I see myself walking a war torn, demolished earth. What the hell KS!

Edited because I meant war torn.

[edit on 30-9-2009 by jackflap]


reply posted on 30-9-2009 @ 08:54 PM by mkross1983
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This is some good shiznit.

I'm reading it along in my head to some Rage (RATM) music.

Nice!



reply posted on 30-9-2009 @ 09:00 PM by KSPigpen
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Thanks, Mr. Flap. I appreciate that it didn't go completely to waste.




reply posted on 30-9-2009 @ 09:27 PM by jackflap
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Hey this stuff never goes to waste. I want to try something.

Beseach thee Lord, bring down your wrath - on the unbeliever's head - the promised one walks earth again - the heathen all lie dead...KSPigpen


From high above the battlefield, unable to be detected by the primitive radar systems of the resistance, a lone B2 banked and climbed as it released its deadly payload. A slight hum was heard from the cockpit as the weapons bay doors were closing, followed by a distant thump as they locked.

"Teardrop has fallen. Sunshine in three seventeen. Standy." The pilot delivered his message as the onboard cameras recorded the imminent impact. The plane gained more altitude to keep it safe from the unearthly explosion that was about to be unleashed. Hell itself was about to be revealed.


reply posted on 30-9-2009 @ 09:52 PM by KSPigpen
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"Teardrop has fallen. Sunshine in three seventeen. Standy." The pilot delivered his message as the onboard cameras recorded the imminent impact. The plane gained more altitude to keep it safe from the unearthly explosion that was about to be unleashed. Hell itself was about to be revealed.


Two seconds later, the heavy filter slides over the lens, producing a dusky, reddish hue. The pod, still trained on the kill box records for posterity the culmination of a nation's will rallied behind the unmatched manufacturing prowess of a machine that had long since forgotten the need to feed it's people.

The glory. The pinnacle of mankind's achievement. The Energy of the sun, let loose in an instant. The electronics blink, but the shielding was successful. The buffeting from the shock wave elicits nervous bravado and relieved cheers from men who had long learned to pretend as though they didn't care.


reply posted on 30-9-2009 @ 10:26 PM by KSPigpen
Originally posted by mkross1983
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post by KSPigpen



This is some good shiznit.

I'm reading it along in my head to some Rage (RATM) music.

Nice!


Thanks Mike. Got a little of that on the machine as well. Ironic. Thanks for letting me know it made you think about it enough to drop a line. I appreciate it.


reply posted on 1-10-2009 @ 08:49 AM by jackflap
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Dominion mine, just slightly charred - relieved of all your fears - this valley here can be your farm - in about a thousand years...KSPigpen


Darkness settled on the target after the furious explosion. The heat was still present. Ash drifted slowly back to the earth like freshly falling snow flakes. Silence was all that there was now. Any life that had existed was evaporated moments before.

A solitary figure now walked these lands. Unseen by mortal eyes. He was larger than any man and his demonic presence was undetectable to the cameras and satellites that were recording the event. The creature surveyed his handiwork and laughed uncontrollably, his head turned skyward.

His minions were hard at work elsewhere convincing the mortals that an appropriate response was required. "Our men would have died in vein than...What of those innocent lives?...The response should be greater...Evil has no place on this earth..." The underlings were very busy indeed. The collaborative efforts of the entities would pay off for them, they were sure of it.

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