Amazing story..
I love the way you write, you make it all look so easy
But its the little things, like your attention to detail that stands out for me.
They were sitting in the stadium listening to a distant drum roll that reverberated around the massive complex. Laser lights shone from high above and scattered across the platform where the Preacher would address the huge crowds. Smoke machines provided a blanket of fog over the stage that poured from its edge and rolled into the crowd.
Stuff like this... it puts you right there in the story.. fantastic.
Have a flag mate.
Well done.
JQ.
