I;m sorry to state that your music need a little more work. Perhaps must more work. Its too monotonous and your voice need a little training. I suppose you would do it in a few years with hard practice.

I bet whomever you wrote it for would be (or was) thrilled to hear it.

If you love to make music, don't let anything discourage you, mainstream music industry 'standards' and 'popular opinion' least of all. Keep it up!

Thanks for sharing with us.

He found the freshest breath and didnt think twice before he took it? Was he looking for it, or was it mearly stumbled upon? Would the freshest breath best be enjoyed through the mouth or the nose?

i suppose it would depend upon what it contained and its volume.

is fresh purely based upon smell? Or is there a factor of humidity to it? it was obviously the freshest givin the title and as such will never see its equal.

What a lucky... im reading the lyrics now.

[edit on 11-9-2009 by Wertdagf]