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posted on Aug, 30 2009 @ 04:42 AM
I wrote this for my first true girlfriend, some years ago, hope you like it, it is kind of sad and dumb (in a radiohead 'i am a loser' style, but i did get her in the end

Today, i want you to have all my feelings

I give to you...

A kiss to your beautiful lips
A tender touch to your precious face
Eye to eye a loving look to your tender soul

Today, i gave my soul away
I gave it to you, but i didn't deliver it at all

Because you..

You looked for the same kiss
But from other lips


Looked for he same touch
But from other hands


Looked for the same eyes
But from other soul

You looked for everything tonight.

But from me?


At all.

This was a txt message sent from my phone, but it got around so fast that in two weeks it was very popular in my school, so much that a few people came around and showed it to me asking me if i haad seen it before
nobody knew that i wrote that, was fun to see how people reacted to it, it is not exactly the same as what i wrote then, but it is very similar, can't remember the exact wording sorry..


Edit because i can't spell, sorry.

[edit on 30-8-2009 by Kaifan]

posted on Aug, 30 2009 @ 06:09 AM
That was a lovely read. Have a flag and a star.

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