Thoughts I see
Inside of me
Each quantumly
An epiphany
So it seems
That in my dreams
I find the means
To shine and gleam
And if its real
I find I feel
When layers peel
Then all will heal
When i wake
Whats at stake
Nothing more to take
The world is fake
This is deep
We are sheep
So not a peep
Go back to sleep
[edit on 29-8-2009 by Conclusion]
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A very interesting style. I really enjoyed it. Few words, but much meaning. Spartan in it's approach but very deep....almost deceptively so.
Great work!
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reply to post by KSPigpen
Thank you for your kind words. Please feel free to post any of yours here.
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I like it, nicely done.
Unfortunately for TPTB
I'm the big bad wolf
their mothers warned them about
HAHA
No more sleep'n for me
I have to help the shepard protect the sheep
I love this $#IT
Don't call me crazy
I'm insane and
loving every minute of it
wouldn't cure it for the world
I have to be insane to understand and comprehend
all the knowledge I contain
I have the mind of a genius and the mentallity of a savage
truly a blessing
yet as I walk down the paths of the slain
I will never lose my values and virtues
I'll never give up this quest it is a promise that I made
Killuminati
Howling At The Full Moon,
Chaotic Wolf
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reply to post by chaoticwolf88
Wow. Is that your poem. If it is not then i would like to see one of yours...nice. 
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