Dawn

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posted on Aug, 28 2009 @ 09:48 AM
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An old one..

Dawn in my mind.

Lost and alone I grew cold,
Darkness wrapped around me,
Each step in fear of death,
I bled emotions in the silence.

There was yet a pale light ahead,
And voices, friends, calling my name,
I stumbled and crawled forward,
Making headway then sliding back.

A flickering lamp to light my way,
Dawn approaching slowly in my mind.
The sounds of friends grew nearer,
The words they spoke became clearer.

Through a mist of bitter tears
I watched the darkness fade behind,
Icy fingers still reaching out,
I walked into the new beginning.

The pain has dulled as helping hands,
Heal the wounds and speak softly,
Time will heal and emotions renew,
Life continues along my road.


(C) 27-06-1995




posted on Aug, 29 2009 @ 12:07 PM
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I can't "edit" my post above? or am I not looking in the right area?



posted on Aug, 29 2009 @ 12:23 PM
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You only have 2 hours to edit something (I think). After that, the edit button disappears.

However, I can edit something in the poem if you like.



posted on Aug, 29 2009 @ 10:24 PM
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Originally posted by masqua
You only have 2 hours to edit something (I think). After that, the edit button disappears.

However, I can edit something in the poem if you like.


Ahh, I se, I just wanted to add that it was written 6 months after I seperated.

Thanks



posted on Sep, 26 2009 @ 09:49 AM
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reply to post by prof-rabbit
 


Beautiful expression. Pain is always the journey of the light at the end of the tunnel.



posted on Sep, 26 2009 @ 10:32 AM
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Originally posted by catalyst2466
reply to post by prof-rabbit
 


Beautiful expression. Pain is always the journey of the light at the end of the tunnel.


Thank you, the light at the end of the tunnel is just a change in perception, the journey continues hopefully with increased clarity.





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