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In My Minds Eye

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posted on Aug, 14 2009 @ 11:33 PM
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In my minds eye I see
a world of plenty
a world of peace
A place where love abounds
there is no hate
there is no greed
no suffering is to be found
In my minds eye
these are the things I find
but alas the sad thing is
my minds eye is totally blind




posted on Aug, 19 2009 @ 07:30 PM
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You know what the best poetry is. Honestly the poetry that sticks more than the rest. It's the ones that we remember. The short sweet ones. And I honestly think this one and others like this are the ones that really inspire us. They don't go off onto different things and focus on one idea. I will remember this for sure. S&F.




posted on Aug, 20 2009 @ 09:40 AM
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Some of the best poetry I enjoy . . . says things to me.

In this case, I feel a "longing", a wish for something to be a certain way.

It's there, in the mind, but unseen . . .maybe because it's so simple yet so
unobtainable, . . . a world of peace . . and no suffering. And the practical
side of our minds say, "Great ideas, but . . . not very realistic". And the
mind's eye stays closed.

But that is also the time when your heart takes over . . and puts your
sincerest hopes into a poem . . like this.





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