posted on Aug, 9 2009 @ 03:31 PM
An honest peek into the minds of Laura and Toby. The symbolism in the figure eight is perfect and reminded me of the mashed potato mountain people
made in a famous ET movie. Also, the use of psychic Alchemy in the transformation of certain elements is a direction I hadn't considered before... a
mental Philosophers Stone.
I can only sum up the method the anti-Indigo' used as 'fighting fire with fire'. Exceptionally well-written, broken down into 4 distinct parts and
very readable paragraph by paragraph.
Your writing talents are obvious to me, in structure as well as creativity.