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(IWWC) Redux

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posted on Jul, 8 2009 @ 12:16 AM
Revan sprang to the side as the shots rained from above. Behind the Neoprene coated shield-walls one could talk Quite exponentially with god.

"Why now? at the CRUX of civilization?!?" she yelled out to no one in particular rather irrationally...

Revan had mere milliseconds to think between shots, but the evidence observed from the facts from the situation made the full scope of everything quite apparent;

Some humanoids had Evolved: seemingly over night. It was not a stark change. Every single day people are expected to go far and beyond for less. Over a seemingly tiny expansion of time, a few select individuals and clans had become quite proficient at "Living"

The Technology Burst of 2010 changed the boundaries of most nations; yet it must be understood, with some great deal of respect that, the seemingly insignificant facts of August 5th 2009 had caught nearly EVERYONE off guard.

Spaceman; one of the worlds most prolific Disk Jockeys, had just arrived in Belgium when he felt the vibrations from deep within Gaia

Spaceman had always felt he could achive far more than anyone might credit him with, and today was the day he could prove it. Before a crowd of 250,000 people Spaceman dropped into a loup because of a seemingly infinitely improbable Record Skip.

The sheer mathematics and timing associated with the accidentally produced groove shall become debatable for the next 5,000 years, but one thing is known,

It was FUNKY..

Spacemans distant glaze at last connected with Revans...

then she was promptly lost in a sea of emotionless faces...

***Because of a quite inferior Cable connection between the near endless racks of musical equipment; and an extremely rare and galactic-gravitationally bound phenomenon; a reverse magnetic burst Traveled through all connected networks worldwide.***

*To make a story short, there where 234,345,567 new invention submittions (The VERY NEXT DAY) that not surprisingly, crashed most of the fraudulent global conglomerates.

As Revan crawled through the rows of roughly drawn stadium seating, she recalled Spacemans Ultimate Sin;

Disrespect for life.

Spacemans Hedonistic empire had grown without bounds as most the population had split between pursuit of Knowledge versus Material. He found he could control most with less than a thought.

One could esaily lay blame to the galaxy as a whole for giving full power to mankind, but that could never stop the evolutionary throws of the Milky Way.

Recycle, Reduce, Re-use...

Time suddenly lost all meaning

As planets and galaxies alike alligined, there was a great vibration that resulted in harmony felt throughout all the dimensions of all the boundless universes.

Revan had snuck into Spacemans packed venue without much difficulty, even with the 50 or so extra guards, Madison Square garden in 2012 is quite indistinguishable from its 2009 version. Retro Guided Missile batteries flanked nearly every conceivable entrance, and recently developed androids kept a rather silent vigil. Revan moved stealthily to the front arch of the balcony and raised her gun.

One shot will be enough...

The only thing that revan hadnt calculated was the ebb of the galactic tide...

[edit on 8-7-2009 by drsmooth23]

posted on Jul, 8 2009 @ 01:15 PM
Well, I was going to go back and rework this, but for some reason the Edit feature is locked... haha, oh well.

silence and darkness, this is not... hahaha

posted on Jul, 8 2009 @ 01:50 PM
When Masqua put forth the rules he stated you could submit another story by having your first one pulled down. If you decide to rework it just ask that this version be removed and then submit your reworked version.

This isn't a bad story. I hope Revan got the shot off

Good luck in the contest,


posted on Jul, 8 2009 @ 02:31 PM
Phone typing. Mwupy is rIght plus MosT oF our StOries have nothing in Common aND that is why jUDges aRe here. I WoulD Like to. Know what the iNdigOS. ThiNK. Though.

posted on Jul, 8 2009 @ 09:46 PM
reply to post by drsmooth23

Now that's one I would not have thought of. A great story and proper ending. So far as I can tell the Indigos have quite a bit to think about. Very good drsmooth23!

posted on Jul, 18 2009 @ 10:58 AM
Interesting theme- can see that it could also be expanded to great heights, clever format and visualization. Enjoy the competion S & F from me. -Cheers!

posted on Aug, 9 2009 @ 03:35 PM

With the clarion sound of what could also be described as a millenium bell, the consciousness of all within the multiple universes/realities was raised.

We shall never know if Revan got that shot off and perhaps that WAS the best place to end your story, leaving it up to the readers to divine according to their desires.


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