Evil walks among us

reply to post by _Phoenix_
Hi Phoenix

Yeh, Antar has reminded me of an experience that I have tried to post in the past but for some reason felt "brakes" on me. Not dark brakes, just it's not the right time brakes. After reading her posts I understand why she asked me a good while back to post about my "tests". She had all this bottled up and was hoping for a "match", 'cause I gotta say that when things like this happen to you it's mind blowing but real and who would believe you? Having someone around who has experienced similar definitely helps.

Here's a link to the thread with my experiences, they're in sequential order and stops where the "tests" experiences should go. Tomorrow I'll try again and also discuss some of the aspects with Antar. It's late and I gotta go to bed in a few minutes.

www.belowtopsecret.com...

STM




[edit on 7/6/2009 by seentoomuch]

reply to post by seentoomuch


hold up a sec. he has a point. the words "true story" are thrown out there, so it must be able to carry or lose that weight.

this is being presented as a true account, not a fictional story. so which is it? sorry for busting up story-time, but there is a giant hole, not only in the ground at the side of the road but in the entire premise as well.

if true... then OP, please answer: who noticed the portal in the ground on the side of the road? the narrator? or are we going to flashback to that?

true accounts need not be suspensful, or written in a colorful literary style. i know it is the gray area... but c'mon, at least make it sound true. if the storyteller can be bothered to describe a match stick, and the angelic-fabio-warrior, why not fill in the blank?

"The Gray Area is a discussion forum that provides a dedicated area for members to post their confessions, disclosures, and related extraordinary personal experiences. Like the highly speculative Skunk Works forum, The Gray Area will tolerate topics that may be unusually hypothetical or unproven for the purpose of vetting the stories of thread-starters by the ATS membership at large."

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it doesn't say "please post fiction here" either....

i'm all for hearing true-life personal accounts. i'm not willing to dismiss every spritual event as imigaination, but not answering the question will make it very easy to do so with this one...

She was 15 at the time and (sorry for saying this Antar) but that was a long time ago. It is very difficult to write experiences from years past, it takes me a day or two of alone time to write just one experience. I have to relive it by relaxing, putting on the music I liked to listen to at that time and in my mind I am there again. I relive an action or two, note the location details, etc. and then I write a paragraph of what I just walked through. Then the process starts all over again for each of the following paragraphs.

Sooo, having explained the process to you I noticed that Antar is a pretty fast poster and perhaps a detail or two was overlooked, but that does not mean that the experience is untrue. It means to me that she rushed the posts perhaps.

STM

[edit on 7/7/2009 by seentoomuch]

i'm not rying to be a stick in the mud. if this forum is somehow geared for fantasy i apologize. my bad.

even presented as fiction, the premise is flawed from the first person perspective. having not been there to witness the portal, the first person cannot accurately describe that event as true story.

i understand that sometimes (most of the time) the impact of a story is based on how grounded in reality it is. the easier it is to suspend disbelief the more close to home it feels. just by starting a tale with "true story" is a plot hook.

there has to be some bait on the hook you see...

Originally posted by antar
I was 15 years old and quite mature for my age.

If you were so mature at this age, why didn't you call somebody for help?

You had time to pee, as somebody pointed out, yet you did nothing to get this weird person out of your boyfriends home when they all ignored you, and were acting odd.

Couldn't you have called a parent, friend, a neighbor, or even the police?

Since you claim you were responsible for your frigid friend, and the boys as well, I can't see how you were mature for your age, since you did nothing but go into the bathroom to pee, leaving them all alone with this stanger, whom you intimate was responsible for how your friends were acting.

I'll give you the benefit of the doubt until you finish your story, but I tend to think there were other "things" going on in that apartment that prevented you from doing the right thing when it came to calling for help.

If this was happening to your son, wouldn't you want him to call you?

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Before you rush to judement you might want to look at the posters profile and read some of their threads and posts. I myself do not believe in anyway this is BS. This is the section where you tell personal stories and experiences. I have read this persons posts and threads before and i believe them 100%

Listen folks the person presenting this story has a long history. If you really want to find out what makes her tick I suggest you read through a few of her threads. A few of them reveal some VERY telling info on her troubled childhood and problems with her mother that would make any of us nuttier that squirrle $***.

Just keep in mind what it says at the top of her avatar......WRITER!!!!
Is it all clicking into place now? A little investigation goes a long way. hint hint.

Originally posted by seentoomuch
She was 15 at the time and (sorry for saying this Antar) but that was a long time ago. It is very difficult to write experiences from years past, it takes me a day or two of alone time to write just one experience. I have to relive it by relaxing, putting on the music I liked to listen to at that time and in my mind I am there again. I relive an action or two, note the location details, etc. and then I write a paragraph of what I just walked through. Then the process starts all over again for each of the following paragraphs.

Sooo, having explained the process to you I noticed that Antar is a pretty fast poster and perhaps a detail or two was overlooked, but that does not mean that the experience is untrue. It means to me that she rushed the posts perhaps.

STM

[edit on 7/7/2009 by seentoomuch]

why do you feel it necessary to "explain the process" to me? we all cope in different ways. is yours textbook? i guess you are the expert. wow. you really schooled me there. exactly what process is that again? apparently THE process. man, i feel so much the wiser now. i did not realize that everyone went through this 'process' the exact same way. so i ask a simple question... does that make me simple?

before you lump me in with some group dynamic let me add... [personal experience deleted] ...you know what, nevermind. you have it all sewn up with 'the process', no need to preach to the converts right?

details? just one. the witness to the portal in the ground alongside the road. thats all.

spiritual battles include being honest.

I like this story. There is something very sinister about diabolical imps. I believe some, thought not all, of it really happened. And I do enjoy a well told tale.

I dont know what to say. I know other dimensions exist. but your story is incredible. If your just pulling our legs then I have to say, its a great story so far nevertheless.

I have a question about these supposedly sex crazed, spirit world, other dimensional creatures.

Sex and sex drive is a hormonal driven experience and hence a physical experience. People who lack these PHYSICAL hormones do not have much or any sex drive.

Therefore, why do non physical other dimensional, portal entering entities have a sex drive if they have no human physical hormones?

I always had this problem believing these sex crazed other world stories because they lack the chemicals that drive sex drive.

What a great read! Who says truth is stranger than fiction!? Bah!


Well done.

Truly very frightening.

Indeed, sometimes evil things do come out from the crevasses in the ground, after being hidden for so long...

Best you can do is arm yourself with as much positive energy as possible. No other responses I can give - because I've never come across such horrible things before. Hope I never will, either.

this is a real nice story.

wanna hear the rest..now =p

Interesting story Antar.

This sort of thing happens more than most people know. The casual observation part for sure. Most won't know it is happening though. What is usually more interesting however in the relationship you mentioned between the "dark" and the "light". It seems like both are necessary or symbiotic at least in a philosophical/religious sense.

This whole experience would never had even occurred had there not been a "little dark man" to present the spiritual challenge. Not that the "little dark man" was there to push teenagers to make-out or act promiscuously, (as if they need any encouragement) but certainly he was there for a specific reason, if not to simply be a catalyst.

To me it would seem both are teachers and necessary for growth.

...the light and the darkness are both alike...

...I am fearfully and wonderfully made...

- The Book of Psalms

- Lee

right, first of, if the twins brothers didnt notice the dark man rising from the ground, like someone said before, who did notice it? this sounds like a very interesting story, but sorry, it just is so far fetched it can be nothing more than a simple story. no one in their right minds should or even could believe a word of this. sorry for sounding narrow minded, im not, its just too far fetched for me. and for others no doubt

seriously, this looks alot like creepypasta

not that that would bother me or anything i like it

but for those who think all this is too far fetched..

excuse me

but

"As the two brothers were walking home from their job at the local casino, they did not notice as a small dark figure rose from the ground from deep within a portal on the side of the road."

if they didnt notice then who did? you? cos this is obviously not true. this is written as a story. your obviously a fantasist by your avatar. but seriously if this is true, how did anyone know that the dark figure rose from the ground from a portal, when no one noticed?

dodgy

Hi ats
i just joined today. i sometimes read posts here from a friend, but now i made my own account. hope it was worth it

Soo... can't wait to read more on here. Hope you'll continue the story soon antar.

hi ,great story..... im am wanting to believe so badly but as the others have stated about the portal? bit iffy. Also im in australia and our drinking and gambling laws are that you cant do either until you are 18, now in the USA i know u cant drink till 21 ,but can you gamble earlier? If not then how were the two brothers walking home from their job at the "casino" and bragging about buying alcohol with a fake id? Seems funny to me but i dont know the laws over there. my two cents
thanx.

[edit on 7-7-2009 by Truespirit82]