Video Contest Entry - Individualism, page 1
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Topic started on 30-6-2009 @ 09:19 PM by The Broadcaste
In this short the topic is Individualism and its relationship to Anonymity.

Please find correctness within. Know Your Role.



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This video is the first in a series I plan on creating. It was done all by myself, and serves to coincide with the music I create as well. I have been inspired so much by ATS that this seems like the perfect chance to post it.

Thank you for taking the time to view it, feel free to leave any comments positive or critical. There's always room for improvement, and it's sure not going to stop me!

PIAO!


reply posted on 15-7-2009 @ 11:42 AM by warrenb
reply to post by The Broadcaste



awesome and amazing video FX, fantastic job!

author available for non-profit projects?

[edit on 15-7-2009 by warrenb]


reply posted on 21-7-2009 @ 10:53 AM by nine-eyed-eel
reply to post by The Broadcaste


I liked it.
All propaganda is good, and it seems like you might like making propaganda.
At different times I was reminded of the "YOU ARE NOT SPECIAL...YOU ARE NOT A UNIQUE SNOWFLAKE" voice-overs in (movie) Fight Club, and some of them old T.O.P.Y "Message From Thee Temple" vids, and of those super-excellent Heaven's Gate recruitment videos (partly maybe from the shaved head - but besides which that fellow had some interesting eye-movement patterns in persuasive speech that you might find relevant).
I do have a couple of critical notes, not at all to cap on you, meaning only to be of slight potential help.
I think some of the editing+dissolves was kinda overly busy, and actually undercut the message of the word content...I would vote for one long static artsy claustrophobic camera angle single take...you could have graphics behind the speaker's head, but (to my taste etc.) nothing should pass between the eyes of the speaker and the eyes of the viewer to break the tension and occlude the speaker's hypnotic gaze...
On a much stupider and more quibbly level I did get hung up on a mental sticking-point objection to part of the text, to the effect that if everything is brought into the light, in a certain way that is a loss of information, and represents an increase in anonymity - if nothing is hidden nothing is emphasized, if everything is revealed nothing is revealed in particular...I mention this not to "have-me-be-right", but just as marketing research in an audience member's reaction...probably I'm weird and nobody else would have that reaction, I'm just one data-point, that is just the part that petted the cat wrong for me...
But like I say, nice work, it is good.
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