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Originally posted by ELECTRICkoolaidZOMBIEtest
well i think i may like this one better and i yet again have another critique. its similar to the other one i gave. the use of "render ol' picasso" throws things off. i think the line has too many syllables. other than that, very nice.
[edit on 25-6-2009 by ELECTRICkoolaidZOMBIEtest]