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posted on May, 4 2004 @ 07:13 AM
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Ok, the new freesylin' thread died. . . .RIP ...

Now, this thread is going to work differently. Anybody can come and challange anyone right here, at any time. So if two competators are online then you can come here and have it down. There is no limit to the battle length, members can agree when they want to stop. As far as judging is concerned, let the people decide. Eventually there will be a final, lets just let it roll. The rules are as follows.

1) No edits
2) Each freestyler must take no more than 5 minutes to reply their 'stylin' after the other member makes a post. If they do, the post is edited out.

Hopefully this will get the ball rolling...go!

[Edited on 6/24/2004 by earthtone]

[Edited on 6/24/2004 by earthtone]




posted on May, 12 2004 @ 12:30 AM
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my rymes dont always make sence,sometimes its like pissin on an electrical fence, i'll grab ya by the neck hold ya up in suspence drag ya on a plane full of turbulance,And the air i'll pollute,then i'll throw you out without a parachute,he'll fall to his grave um,theres no way i can save um,to the ground with a big thud,up to your neck in mud covered in blood,ok my turn to jump! i hope i dont wind up like the last guy,but when i jumped the propeller caught my eye,it twisted my head around and snapped my neck,this kind of thing will put a guy in check,when i hit the ground i was fine and dandy quick somebody hand me some candy,this aint good at all i need to go to the mall but dont got no money no weed or no alcohol,by now im throwin fits stinky and ichin my pits, callin people ugly misfits dip#s and #in idiots,by now the security was alerted,its timed to bail i dont need to go back to jail,i got a sandwich in my pocket but the bread is stale,so through the back door i ran just as quick as i can,security yellin "HEY STOP THAT MAN!", had to leave the mall too close of a call, i gotta away clean as i split the scene woke up in the morning it was only a dream



posted on May, 13 2004 @ 02:03 AM
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far out Taurus



posted on May, 13 2004 @ 09:42 PM
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If nobody responds does that mean im king of the rap hill?



posted on May, 13 2004 @ 09:59 PM
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Originally posted by Taurus
my rymes dont always make sence,........... i gotta away clean as i split the scene woke up in the morning it was only a dream


Okie doke...here ya go dude...

I rap the rhyme
I dont waste yer time
You wanna leave mutha#er?
First listen up

I havent committed a crime
I dont waste a dime
on petty lil #
Like 24 inch rims
or some some oversized tits
for the slut down the street

When i drop this beat
Yall better run
Before you see my feat
and I pull out a gun

Yeah im from AK
and yes, im the only one
Once you see me coming yer way
You better dial 911
cuz the bodies gon drop
and the caps gon pop
When those #in cops
Try to take down my shop

Now you know how i represent
Not like those 2 punk ass quarters,
50 cent

Now i say goodbye
I aint gon buzz around
like a #in fly
Im on my way
going Hellbound.

Edited to get rid of long quote...

[Edited on 13-5-2004 by dreamlandmafia]



posted on May, 13 2004 @ 10:33 PM
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Yea finally some one to play with,when its all said and done you'll think im just a myth,you'll see me on the spot when ya try to take a shot,do ya got what it takes or do ya shakes i'll pull all the stakes amd make no mistakes,remember its all in fun when i pull a Tommygun you'll be on the run for somethin ya never dun, oops a inacent victum,i got em frome behind as i shot em in the spine i wont pull no simple crime i got warrants in more than one state can you relate,are you gonna instagate or player hate,either way i'll decide yur fate



posted on May, 16 2004 @ 05:02 AM
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I'll start up with prayer..
makin a speach to a non existent God who puts the killers in the chair.
the whole gawdamn system isn't fair,
Prisons packed with people who shouldn't even be there.
locked up for life just for smokin a herb
Callin to the cell blocks im packin' up the reverb
break thru the cell block walls
the curtain calls
Im putting Bush inside a barrel n' throwin him off niagra falls.
An' thats the whole administration too
fundamentalism breedin violence money is the only view.
Everyday im feelin like I'm reborn?
I'm moving up my garden to the white house lawn . .

Begginning our lives at the peak innocence
Lettin' our issues build up a wall of ignorance
If truth is a promise, then they've broken the pact
T.V masses braught up on mislead facts
leading to mislead views, they choose to
fall thru the cracks.
fall thru the cracks
fall thru the cracks
back in black, the Bush's are back
Daddy couldn't get it right, sent his son to set the track.
Cheatin into power
the truth is sour
They get a worlds worth of oil fields to devour!
Not stopping even if it means war,
take a rifle and helmet leave ya morals at the door
blood for oil cannot be accepted anymore
anymore.



posted on May, 18 2004 @ 03:52 AM
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I rap like a maniac i'll run up on your porch and steal your welcome mat and ovcource i'll steal your porch,youll be yellin so much yur voice will be horse,
after i GTA yur car i'll get drunk leave the bar drive to the yur house and steal yur tv and vcr,i got enough sreet cred to where i dont have to hide in a shed,but instead in a manchon holdin the guy for ransom,not to mention when im around theres to much tention,ive always got a smith and wesson incase i gotta teach a guy a lesson no need for confessin, i got judges and lawyers on the payroll there on my side and if need be i'll take ya on a one way ride to me its just another homaside,and for example this one guy who had to die was fightin my friend,i told em i'll get em off ya,we buried him next to Jimmy Hoffa,i told the cops it wasnt me that did it so forget it dont admit it i dont want to be comitted,the goverment said so what as long as we get are cut.


[Edited on 21-5-2004 by Taurus]



posted on May, 21 2004 @ 04:52 PM
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Awww man, earthtone, that was sweet like a chrismas cake fresh outta the oven.



posted on May, 23 2004 @ 11:12 PM
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the pain, the pain its drivin me insane im duranged,
i feel myself mutate and changed, i'll pop your bubble,
every where i go i cause trouble, and the pain causes myegrains,
but forget the pain, i'll swing an axe and watch your blood drain,
and the # gets insane when im around,
maybe thats cause im down with the clowns,
so ya know i gotta give em props,
while i sit here drinkin my fago pop,nonstop,
so im off to the carnaval freak show,
gotta a bag of peanuts and a keg of faygo,
so i go and i roll and i stroll trough the big top smokin a bowl,
im swingin and chopin and hackin bodies to peices while im eatin reeces,
i got bombarded with paintballs it hurts right here,
and my favorite color is clear,they told me to get real
so i tore the door off flintstone's car and bent the steel,
aint nobody dowtin that i'll start spoutin my mouth off like a water fountin,
cloutin the mind with nothin but words that ryme while commiting crimes smokin blunts and dimes
youl hear the ding when i hit the chimes,
first youl feal your body get cold then you'll die and start to grow mold,
what can ya say when ya see your own blood spray
across the room and hit ray,
to be continued till another day



posted on Jun, 7 2004 @ 10:34 PM
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Rwaaaaaaaaargh!
i'm finding out what fake ass sluts like you are about
you want to change me into something inside out fuse me with beliefs i care nothing about
stop treating me this way you seem to collectively shout
nothing but a liar, evil woman, yet you're my desire
thats what I admire even though you disgust me, you're my inner fire
cant live without you even more can't stand to be around you
Rwaaaaagh!


.... thats all i got
.. slow night.



posted on Jun, 17 2004 @ 06:35 PM
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Just when ya thought ya seen the last of me,please!
im back from the dead like a cockroach with fleas and a horrible disease
everywhere i go im gonna spread magic and havoc
its gonna be traggic when it goes down the road through traffic
i listen to the tire squeals,then i watch the crash as the metal peals
then i disapear like i wasnt even here and into a bar with a fresh beer
noboby really knows whats going on,till i start a fire in the porta-john
the place goes up in smoke,its no joke,everyone starts to gage and choke
by the time the fire department gets there,
im gone with no forensics proof of hair
my life is full of exitement thats for shure,for 1200 il sell ya a fer
later for now its time to go see some hotteis,
maybe in my next rap il have more dead bodies



posted on Jun, 17 2004 @ 09:40 PM
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My boy Kerry be arguing with Bush on CBS
But I'm over here tryin'a pass the tes'
I jus' be spittin it out on BTS

See, erythin' all #ed up now
With this "war"
and Bush tryin' a hump a cow.

Out in da world, you gotta admit we lost some rights from 1-1-9
Come young come old come blind,
No place to unwind

No one seems to care
About this # or even Smokey the Bear
I don't know why this crap #s me up so much
Like I did to your wife, GWB, when she went to brunch.

If my home boy Kerry don't win,
It'a be time, Tic-Tic-Boom.

*OUTKAST WROTE THIS!!*
Tic Boom Tic Tic Boom
Tic Boom Tic Tic boom
*/*

My homeboy Mumia's in jail
for "supposedly" shooting a cop
and beating him with a rail.

What's with the racist cops
and judges?
Come into a house and, *pop* *pop*

No justice no peace
No racist
police!



posted on Jun, 21 2004 @ 01:04 AM
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Get real, you rap monkeys cant handle me, its not like I come scandle free.
but what id really like to see is one of you get the best of me.
yea wright, like that will ever happen, you hang with me at rappin.
all to bad ill diss you fools, worse than piss filled pools and pins on stools.
ok lets play, so yo mig whats up with your name and the other two digits?
it sounds like a band with 12 midgets.
and for Lysergic, i baked you some poisin cookies, i hope your not allergic?
earthtone!! are you a enviornmentalist? if i burnt down the rainforest would you get pist,in that case ill grab a branch then ill pull and twist, until i get carpotunnel in my wrist.
ahh yes dreamlandmafia, i got a okie dokie for you dude,this might sound a little rude, its something you won't like, but i picked up your girlfriend on your bike, your probley a fat kid named Chunk, you got a bike so how ya gonna stuff me in the trunk.
you call yourself a mafiaso, sit down and drink a faygo.


[Edited on 21-6-2004 by Taurus]



posted on Jun, 21 2004 @ 08:31 AM
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Taurus? Who the # do ya'll think ya spittin' to?
Quit wastin' all our bandwidth with that # you tryina' do
cause i'm
runnin' big circles round your game
its always same ,
ya shamed
cause I be freakin out your mind with ma lyrical pain

you better run for the hills

I could slap you with the bak of ma hand
jus' ta get some cheap thrills
yeh thats right, thats all you really are
you aint no star,
like in goodfellas, schemin', ill stab you up
in the trunk of ma car

Thats right, my rhymes startin ta get heavy,
but I'm teaching you a lesson
so you better get ready,
to fall down hard
you freakin retard!
ya'll had enough of this yet because aint even gone far

yet .

don't mess
My beats will arrest
be my guest
and try and beat this lyrical test,
I gota bullet proof vest,
that you can't get thru
Cause that b ull# that your rhymin shows us that aint got a clue.
so
bitch
step away from the mic
and ride away on your bike
I'll give you one last chance before I really start to fight.



posted on Jun, 21 2004 @ 12:19 PM
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thats what im talkin about, but i still wanna hear you other 3 shout without a dought, run your plot so i can see what ya got.


thats great, a rap war, i love it
that wasnt to bad earthtone


i hope nobody got affended, i just wanna have a little fun
but i still want ya to came at me with all ya got.



posted on Jun, 21 2004 @ 12:22 PM
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Originally posted by Taurus



thats great, a rap war, i love it








posted on Jun, 22 2004 @ 03:57 AM
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when I spit its so magnificent
you think that god did it
its a given when I rip it
otha rhymes lose significance
witness and start trippin off of greatness in the makin
had you shakin, now shook,
hooked,
like a fish on a line
I reels em in every time
I'ma straight double five
that's dime for you lames
here's some flames for this game
stupid tricks, peep the name
its the S-A-F
leavin chins on they chest
certified word-smith



posted on Jun, 24 2004 @ 07:02 AM
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Saphronia, that was nice
it went real down sweet
But I'm still waitin' for taurus
to try and match my peak

He started up a war that has only begun...
Now it's his turn so a rap gota be done.....



............



posted on Jul, 10 2004 @ 01:42 AM
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Just when ya thought ya had me all under control
I come back on a roll and make ya'all pay the toll
And if i told ya once i told ya twice
When i diss people they look worse than Vanilla Ice
Take Earthtone for example
Ya get mixed up in my rymes ya will get trampled
And look at Earthtone thinkin i cant match his peak
Ill stand on the earth alone as i take a leak ya frickin freak
Saphronia thought she had me shakin,she must be fakin
I would'nt trust anybody that would strait double 5
She might dime ya out just to stay alive
Im not a mexican but im dark and tanned
I wonder how cocky i can get before i get







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