A Man's Wish (Poem), page 1


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reply posted on 5-8-2009 @ 09:47 PM by KSPigpen
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I really enjoyed that. It made me think of love. Of someone you didn't deserve, but got to love anyway, and then lost. Kind of sad, but generous. A long time to get over someone.


reply posted on 5-8-2009 @ 09:54 PM by N3krostatic
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Thank you for the kind words. I actually had someone in mind when I wrote this one. Unfortunately she always thought less of herself and chose the lesser men. I know her well but sometimes even the most beautiful don't know what they have going for them. Thanx again!


reply posted on 5-8-2009 @ 11:45 PM by KSPigpen
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I appreciate you explaining it a little more...I thought it rude to ask, so I just said what it made me feel. Thank you very much for sharing. It was beautiful and now has much more depth.


reply posted on 6-8-2009 @ 12:28 AM by N3krostatic
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Thank you so much! I think we both have similar taste in poetry as you seem to always notice my work and since I will check your threads just for new or more work and I do enjoy every bit of it. Great minds think alike, or perhaps poetic minds. lol

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reply posted on 6-8-2009 @ 12:31 AM by N3krostatic
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Thank you for the compliment and I'll never consider it rude if you ask. As a matter of fact I have received some critiques on my other work and am grateful for it.

You have also got me thinking, I should always explain my poems. They will make much more sense and fit the setting better. So thank you for asking!

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