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posted on Jun, 12 2009 @ 03:15 PM
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This is my submission to the ATS music contest.

Breathe


Let me know what you think!


LYRICS:

Breathe

If you try to breathe, try and hide it please
If you try to breathe, you're gonna get us killed
you're gonna get us murdered
you're gonna get us killed
We're gonna be screaming for life

It flies over sweaty sands, all it sees, abandoned faces
Heat beats down on distant traces, the sun does not command
Only tangled undone laces, lying restless in the sand

If you're breathing try and hide it
you never hear this kind of quiet
did you see, the crumbling bricks, done in by me?

See through ideal hero shattered, condemned to capitol offense,
New direction can wash its hands, if shaky grounds truly matter,
Devotion seeping through the cracks, frozen and easily shatter

If you're breathing try and hide it
you never hear this kind of quiet
did you see, the crumbling bricks, done in by me?

I'm tired of sleeping can you wake me
I'm tired of sunlight give me shade
Betting it all on time to change it
It's probably lost because it's running late




posted on Jun, 17 2009 @ 01:43 PM
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No critics? Nothing?
No praises?



posted on Jun, 26 2009 @ 06:16 PM
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Oh im really loving this, The Style is great, Mellowed out with a sense of unsureness,

Love it!



posted on Jun, 26 2009 @ 08:21 PM
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Thank you Asala!
Pleased you like it



posted on Jul, 11 2009 @ 03:39 PM
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I really love this song. Sadly beautiful



posted on Jul, 13 2009 @ 12:56 PM
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Thank you HulaAnglers!
The world does seem sadly beautifull





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