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posted on Jun, 5 2009 @ 11:22 PM
"why ? man you ripped my tongue out , after telling me to be quiet and things would be alright... why

"you were in our path ,an enemy with spirit , you needed silenced"

" But do you know the pain the degradation the grief you caused?"

"I know now you keep me here between life and death ....until you make me understand.

" You grabbed me in a headlock and shouted at me in my ears , to be humble to accept, you then held me by the neck whilst your subordinate grabbed the pliers , secured my tongue and ripped my tongue and innards out"

" That was my anger my fire that burned , that which was required to secure victory against you and your kind"

" I watched you for decades living with a loving wife and children, did you tell your
loved ones of your deed?
"Do you think you were the only one? I butchered hundreds with my own hands, many suffered more than you, at least you died within minutes, many took days after our methods.

"You feel no remorse?"

"Only that you keep me here in this betwwen world"

" No Regrets"

" I should have just killed you outright , the tongue has come back to bite me obviously"

" You were barbaric cruel inhuman to me"
" Get in the line"
" Iam stuck here in this in between world until we understand. I cannot understand you"

"Get in the line"

" What if you had your tongue ripped out with pliers and lived for seventeen minutes"?

" I would hate you forever comrade"

"But I cannot move on if hate you forever"

" I know that comrade"

"So what can be done?

" You forgive me whilst I laugh at you comrade whilst I despise you and your new found tongue"

"So I forgive you, whilst you hate me?

"Of course why else did this happen to you comrade?"

"So I go to heaven , and then you?

"I go to what you choose"

"Well what would I choose eh?"

"What your heart decides"

"You caused me a pain a humiliation a dreadful terrible death, what you ask what your fate is?"

"You show no remorse , no decency, you reply as an animal'


"I say to you...

posted on Jun, 5 2009 @ 11:26 PM
Good read! Thank you. It makes me think of the realm between life and death and I've been pondering writing about that for some time now.

posted on Jun, 5 2009 @ 11:35 PM
reply to post by Dr Conspire

Pretty good read. Get creative expand on it. The sky's the limit!!!

posted on Jun, 5 2009 @ 11:45 PM
Take you're original concept and go wild with it. Not just wild, hog wild.

Maybe then..............................

posted on Jun, 6 2009 @ 12:46 AM
Thanks you all for the encouraging words, but the spooky thing is , the inspiration was from a very horrible dream two days ago.

And ...that is the foundation of the post.

Such a brutal horrible dream, hordes of Russians advancing across a plain, kicked off by a soccer ball.

A person continuing the kicking but the ball is a diminishing ball of ice, he turns around ...picks the me;lting ball up rugby style and the army eyes him and continues.

posted on Jun, 29 2009 @ 01:03 PM
Good entry my friend, even though spooky as hell. I hope the between world is a lot kinder than that. Thanks for entering the writing contest.

I hope you do well,


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