posted on May, 30 2009 @ 07:00 PM
The hubby wrote this
First time I read both of his short stories and they are pretty good! I had no idea while couch potatoing and him sitting at the pc, typing furiously
that they would come out... I was left enthralled.
He genuinely seemed disappointed that no one as of yet, left a comment on his second story. This is when I told him, let me fix myself a cup of joe
and read those two stories of yours.
This story somehow left me perplexed is so many ways that I had to tell him, In my opinion as to maybe why no one has left no comment. It is a cold
slap on the face as of things that have yet to come, too much realistic for my own taste and to maybe a lot of you. Truly felt me uneasy.
Scared the bejesus out of me for that is probably what would happen if
such things comes to pass.
These are my own inflated 2¢ on what he last wrote.
Didn't know that the hubby had such a talented pen, I truly hope that he will consider furthering his first story and send it to small publications
and further his talent by writing more short stories.
Titorite's ever loving wify