My Immortal pen pal

I was hoping for a wild sex romp but it didn't happen. You tease!

Great story I too clicked on your signature from another thread and was amazed at how good and intriguing this story was. It pulled me right into it. I agree that you should definitely consider making this into a book or something. Wouldn't mind reading the rest of the tales of April and Luke.

Zetetic_of_Truth

Now that was a good yarn! However, I felt she was to civil to the boy and I thought she should have been a little more cunning and sinister. Plus, I would've liked to read about her attacks on the Catholic vampire hunters. Anyway that was a very good story and if you would be so kind why don't you add to it. It appears that you have quite a few fans on here. Good story!

Now that was a good yarn! However, I felt she was to civil to the boy and I thought she should have been a little more cunning and sinister. Plus, I would've liked to read about her attacks on the Catholic vampire hunters. Anyway that was a very good story and if you would be so kind why don't you add to it. It appears that you have quite a few fans on here. Good story!

Sorry for the double post my computer messed up.

[edit on 21-6-2009 by Jakes51]

Your story was very enjoyable. It left me wanting to hear more, and I don't read a lot of fiction! I appreciated that it was not oversold with explicit sex and violence. Keep writing!

S&F! Great story. Be sure to message me when you write another.

Fantastic story, I really enjoyed it.....had me on the edge of my seat!