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posted on Jun, 16 2009 @ 03:20 PM
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I was hoping for a wild sex romp but it didn't happen. You tease!




posted on Jun, 21 2009 @ 11:50 AM
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Great story I too clicked on your signature from another thread and was amazed at how good and intriguing this story was. It pulled me right into it. I agree that you should definitely consider making this into a book or something. Wouldn't mind reading the rest of the tales of April and Luke.

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posted on Jun, 21 2009 @ 12:38 PM
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Now that was a good yarn! However, I felt she was to civil to the boy and I thought she should have been a little more cunning and sinister. Plus, I would've liked to read about her attacks on the Catholic vampire hunters. Anyway that was a very good story and if you would be so kind why don't you add to it. It appears that you have quite a few fans on here. Good story!



posted on Jun, 21 2009 @ 12:38 PM
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Now that was a good yarn! However, I felt she was to civil to the boy and I thought she should have been a little more cunning and sinister. Plus, I would've liked to read about her attacks on the Catholic vampire hunters. Anyway that was a very good story and if you would be so kind why don't you add to it. It appears that you have quite a few fans on here. Good story!


Sorry for the double post my computer messed up.

[edit on 21-6-2009 by Jakes51]



posted on Jun, 27 2009 @ 06:02 AM
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Your story was very enjoyable. It left me wanting to hear more, and I don't read a lot of fiction! I appreciated that it was not oversold with explicit sex and violence. Keep writing!



posted on Jun, 27 2009 @ 02:28 PM
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S&F! Great story. Be sure to message me when you write another.



posted on Sep, 11 2009 @ 09:18 PM
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Fantastic story, I really enjoyed it.....had me on the edge of my seat!




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