Your Daily Haiku

reply to post by whaaa


morning whaaa

my buzz remains - un-killed

:-)

language works our land
views fall fast and hard away
beneath this flying

patchwork fields of mind
beneath speeding crafts of words
behold us working

higher is better
faster, higher – better still
self’s obligation

sorry - just rethought something

[edit on 3/6/2010 by Spiramirabilis]

dammit - wasn't fast enough!

whoever starred me - hope you would still star the amended version

:-)

reply to post by Spiramirabilis


I starred you yes me
A lovely blue star for you
A pretty blue star

But not the same no
That twinkle in the night sky
Those are prettier

just reading through some stuff...

controversy - dissent - warnings!

opinions...

all in my beloved haiku thread?

I love this place

:-)

Red badge of courage
Someone gave me a nice prize
Star on my forehead

reply to post by The Motorcycle Boy


Well deserved badge
For profanity confined
In a dirty little ditty
and hardly refined.

The warm sun is out
melting all the ice away
rumble bang crash boom

there goes my gutters
Ice falling, took them along
shattered my window

Oh and once again
the insurance company to call
one more estimate


Stupid ice..

Oh Masqua...love you
You are one of the good ones
You can have my points

whaaa, could you teach me some other forms of poetry to have fun with? I get tired of Haiku, I'm primarily a song writer but like to dabble with a little poetry to ease my mind. Maybe you could show me some stuff?

Are they out in space?
Waiting for us to visit?
We may never know

I was just thinking
Maybe they could come see us
Put us on and stuff

reply to post by KyleOrtonArmy


KOA,

I wish I could!! The master of the form in these parts is Ms. Spiramirabilis.
All I know, I've learned from her.

reply to post by whaaa



that's not at all how I see it whaaa

you're the poetry guy

but it's a very nice thing you just said- thank you

(I've been working on another - and now I'll probably choke)

:-)

reply to post by whaaa



all reflection known
sources seen swimming in selves
art’s brother in arms

A lonesome feeling
comes from deep inside myself
a scream in my head

a lonely feeling
like a wolfs sorrowful cry
to the moon above

edit to fix a line.

[edit on 9-3-2010 by capgirl]

crows wake grey eyed March
purple wool in almost rain
almost came Spring’s name





[edit on 3/10/2010 by Spiramirabilis]

I almost feel like Haiku only makes sense in Japanese, I almost feel guilty writing Haiku in English even if I am just messing around. Nah, it's nothing to worry about.

Sickness in Winter
Always will the body ache
Sweat until you freeze

reply to post by KyleOrtonArmy


begin Japan can
those thoughts under also ran
all words blood of man

also:

from warmer climes Kyle?
Colorado less than most
our less winters toast

:-)

Monk in Retreat

Private Silent Cashless

Knock Knock Prison New Cell

Here

Elf

reply to post by Spiramirabilis


I'm from the mountains
Zero degrees or below
Miles and miles of snow

I admire your work
Your writing and poetry
I admire it all

My name is Louis
Kyle Orton is a QB
Just for the Broncos

reply to post by MischeviousElf


I've never seen that form of Haiku before. I must have missed it but I didn't realize there was a form of Haiku with that alignment of syllables within stanzas. I learn something new every day!

Midnight stars alight
amongst heaven's vast expanse
a dreamer's respite