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posted on Aug, 8 2009 @ 12:22 PM
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There it is again...a blatant error in the Haiku. 6 syllables on the past line.


What the hell, were all friends here!

bumblingly old short
mottled apes discover, loose
serpent destroys lust




posted on Aug, 8 2009 @ 01:10 PM
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There it is again...a blatant error in the Haiku. 6 syllables on the past line.


maybe we should mess with the rules some - just for grins

what happens - the universe implodes?

probably not...

13/4/7...?

i have some catching up to do - haven't been reading even - for days...

(sorry)



posted on Aug, 8 2009 @ 01:23 PM
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Probly coyote


also - depending on who you are and where you're from - coyote can be just 2 syllables

:-)



posted on Aug, 8 2009 @ 11:04 PM
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Originally posted by Spiramirabilis
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Probly coyote


also - depending on who you are and where you're from - coyote can be just 2 syllables

:-)



Yep, around Lubbock they callem Kai Yots, long o



obscenely bragging
compassionate sailor looks
buoyantly heart throb

[edit on 8-8-2009 by whaaa]



posted on Aug, 8 2009 @ 11:11 PM
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The summer rain beads
drops chasing each other
building to a faster finish



posted on Aug, 9 2009 @ 04:55 PM
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I am
This is
You are
I love you



posted on Aug, 10 2009 @ 07:19 PM
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Cheese and cracker crumbs
In bed between us like bugs
That's a Ritz cracker



posted on Aug, 12 2009 @ 07:48 PM
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Blood and bone and brain
Splattered across the highway
Better hose it down



posted on Aug, 12 2009 @ 08:16 PM
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beautiful. Your haiku really touched me.



posted on Aug, 12 2009 @ 08:17 PM
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Lear makes me crazy
holograms, my bleedin' adz
just say "no" to drugs


edit: I'm beggin' all of your forgiveness. My style of writing haiku is to write in the moment, exactly what I am feeling that precise second. It isn't always savory. I suppose we all do this, without needing to justify it. My bad.

[edit on 12/8/09 by argentus]



posted on Aug, 12 2009 @ 08:23 PM
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Where I grew up, north eastern Idaho, near the Lakota nation, it was pronouced cay-o-TEH', or cay-O'-Tee.

po' lil' coyote
always has to steal his lunch
rabbits run too fast

Respect never gained
Night slinking, unfeared, recoiled
It's a hard-knock life

[edit on 12/8/09 by argentus]



posted on Aug, 15 2009 @ 12:44 PM
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oh whaaa - I would never mess with the Haiku :-)

they had it worked out long ago...

long wait on Night’s bed
dark arms hold soft gossip said
nape draped in blue din



posted on Aug, 19 2009 @ 09:37 PM
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horseflies float slowly
craftily, panda rains, dark
poetess fleeting



posted on Aug, 21 2009 @ 05:23 PM
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turns once Summer’s face
finds place in falling silver
light escapes Fall’s eyes



posted on Aug, 22 2009 @ 01:38 PM
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early days allow
wilding skeins fast flying sing
quicken trumpets south



posted on Aug, 23 2009 @ 10:22 PM
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kingdoms scratch flustered
fisherwomen squeaking still
wintertime reddens



posted on Aug, 26 2009 @ 02:21 PM
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waters wander long
greening scents on singing stone
caravan whispers

[edit on 8/26/2009 by Spiramirabilis]



posted on Aug, 26 2009 @ 05:20 PM
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My ass is itchy
I must not have wiped too well
I need a bidet




[edit on 26-8-2009 by Excitable_Boy]



posted on Aug, 26 2009 @ 05:22 PM
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EB is back!



posted on Aug, 26 2009 @ 05:22 PM
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don't know how I did that - twice

but it is nice to see you're back

[edit on 8/26/2009 by Spiramirabilis]



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