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reply posted on 8-8-2009 @ 12:22 PM by whaaa
reply to post by Excitable_Boy





There it is again...a blatant error in the Haiku. 6 syllables on the past line.


What the hell, were all friends here!

bumblingly old short
mottled apes discover, loose
serpent destroys lust


reply posted on 8-8-2009 @ 01:10 PM by Spiramirabilis
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There it is again...a blatant error in the Haiku. 6 syllables on the past line.


maybe we should mess with the rules some - just for grins

what happens - the universe implodes?

probably not...

13/4/7...?

i have some catching up to do - haven't been reading even - for days...

(sorry)


reply posted on 8-8-2009 @ 01:23 PM by Spiramirabilis
reply to post by Excitable_Boy





Probly coyote


also - depending on who you are and where you're from - coyote can be just 2 syllables

:-)



reply posted on 8-8-2009 @ 11:04 PM by whaaa
Originally posted by Spiramirabilis
reply to
post by Excitable_Boy





Probly coyote


also - depending on who you are and where you're from - coyote can be just 2 syllables

:-)



Yep, around Lubbock they callem Kai Yots, long o



obscenely bragging
compassionate sailor looks
buoyantly heart throb

[edit on 8-8-2009 by whaaa]


reply posted on 12-8-2009 @ 08:23 PM by argentus
reply to post by whaaa



Where I grew up, north eastern Idaho, near the Lakota nation, it was pronouced cay-o-TEH', or cay-O'-Tee.

po' lil' coyote
always has to steal his lunch
rabbits run too fast

Respect never gained
Night slinking, unfeared, recoiled
It's a hard-knock life

[edit on 12/8/09 by argentus]


reply posted on 26-8-2009 @ 05:22 PM by Spiramirabilis
reply to post by Excitable_Boy



don't know how I did that - twice

but it is nice to see you're back

[edit on 8/26/2009 by Spiramirabilis]
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