Poems i came up with

i was bored and came up with these :

As the petals drop,
the thorns whither and die
i see your face and stop
and briefy see you cry
and i know our love is forever
it never will stop.

new poem :

Cracks appearing on his face
hes half is gone forever
he knows its to late
without her theres not much he can endever

wishing on his past times. he see's his love
all ends soon as he starts to float
he floats so high above
shes so tiny now, once agian hes only got hope

crashing down back through earth
no one can understand his pain
people dont care, to find what they could unearth
with half a heart he's gone insane.




OK that might not be poems i dunno what they are put i thought u was post them for abit of fun,


I normally write music so its kinda related.

reply to post by thecrow001


Crow, these are great, i felt the words dude
Would love to hear more of them.

im a little bit of a writer myself tell me what ya think:


Your wooly cotton whispers
Bring about the thaw
Your cool electric eyes
give me a shock

My girl's gaze raises cadavers
She can resurrect the dead
Now Im nothing but a zombie;
a slave to lust, a slave to the flesh

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I was brought up in the fields
A Slave to the shepherd
Where thy art was concealed
And then zealously severed

The irony is bewildering
Glowing, melting everything
Knowing is the blind man's burden
That is Truth in suffering




I jot down a little poetry here and there during my free time, its ok stuff. Its definitly relieves alot of tension i build up. I can dig your words man. keep at it..