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Masterpiece (poetic)

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posted on May, 11 2009 @ 10:02 PM
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If I had to paint my world in
various shades and hues
I would start my painting
with a deep dark shade of blue
Here and there a streak of red
for the love that I've been shown
but also to represent
the pain that I have known
A splattering of yellow
for the happiness and laughs
a smear of green in varying shades
for the earth, the trees, the grass
Here and there a gleam of gold
for the sunshine I adore
a bit of gray for the cloudy days
and the rain that sometimes pours
A tinge of brown for the fertile soil
from which the flowers spring forth
A glistening speck of the brightest white
for the great star in the north
A circle of purple to represent
the fruit sweet on the vine
that with time and caring
makes a lovely glass of wine
Of course I'd add a bit of pink
it is a feminine hue
and for the all the sorrow
I'd finish with a little more blue
This painting would represent my life
that will one day cease
but a part of me will live on
in the form of a masterpiece...


[edit on 11-5-2009 by Greenize]




posted on May, 13 2009 @ 12:29 AM
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Originally posted by Greenize
This painting would represent my life
that will one day cease
but a part of me will live on
in the form of a masterpiece...


"This painting", is of course, your poem, now forever a part of ATS and the group conscious. It remains alive and endures.

Beautiful work. Very thoughtful.

[edit on 13-5-2009 by Axial Leader]



posted on May, 13 2009 @ 09:50 PM
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Thank you! I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on this piece...I am proud of it!



posted on May, 14 2009 @ 02:22 PM
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very nice! S for you
The words unfold like a painting in front of my eyes reading it



posted on May, 15 2009 @ 11:44 PM
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reply to post by GypsK
 


Thank you!
I am glad that you liked it.



posted on Jun, 8 2009 @ 10:40 PM
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This is definitely something to be proud of. Honestly I would imagine finding this piece in a book of popular literature or some revered, leather bound work carefully guarded, placed away in the shelves of beauty. That's what I think anyway.


I really do love your work.




posted on Jun, 8 2009 @ 10:44 PM
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Thank you! A million times thank you. You are the kindest person. I truly look forward to your critiques!!



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