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Event Horizon

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posted on Apr, 14 2009 @ 09:23 AM
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Paralysis consumes within a pale frame

Hiding such power, internal

Silently I observe

An event horizon engulfing my being

Ensnared by subconscious dwellers

I am eternal

Light my flame

Feed my will

Leave this body, soaring

Higher

Upon this cloud nine

My creation

Kosmos bends upon my whims

Awakened




This event horizon

My point of no return

Beckoning to unfurl

My soul across Creation's forms




Kosmos bends upon my whims

Awakened

Feel the point of no return

Eternal




posted on Apr, 14 2009 @ 09:26 AM
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Hey Dalan you are really poppin them out this morning! Manifest Destiny, Destruction Children, I am having a hard time keeping up with you. All good, all true and starred

Hula



[edit on 14-4-2009 by HulaAnglers]



posted on Apr, 14 2009 @ 09:28 AM
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Yeah, I've had these ones lying around for a few days now and thought I'd post them.

I hope you enjoy them.



posted on Apr, 14 2009 @ 09:34 AM
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Not to dampen your creative spirit, but wouldn't it be better to include all your poems into one thread like I did with Ghost Lodge? (in Collab. Writing, but that doesn't matter)

Starting a thread with each poem will only spread them all over the forum eventually.



posted on Apr, 14 2009 @ 09:37 AM
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posted on Apr, 14 2009 @ 09:37 AM
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Good point.

I hadn't even thought about.

Can I add more to that one thread as I write them, like some kind of edit function?

Actually, I checked your post and noticed how you did that.

I'll keep that in mind for anything I post in the future.

[edit on 4/14/2009 by dalan.]



posted on Apr, 14 2009 @ 09:40 AM
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Originally posted by dalan.
Can I add more to that one thread as I write them, like some kind of edit function?



Just click on 'Post Reply'. I'd even suggest posting the ones you started the other threads with, if only to keep them in one place.

Continuity is a great thing, especially in poetry. It adds perspective with each addition.



posted on Apr, 14 2009 @ 09:41 AM
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Manifest Destiny



Manifest Destiny

Unconsciously shaping

Our future's end

By fear you shall know us

Cowering behind sovereignty

Knock down these walls

Watch this facade

The symptom of our creation

Come crashing down

The illusion of control

Stems from the power we hand out

Ever so sleeping you create

A Dead World



[edit on 4/14/2009 by dalan.]



posted on Apr, 14 2009 @ 09:42 AM
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Destruction Children



Mother's Progeny

Raped the glory of her womb

Destruction children

Dream of violence for selfish gain

Cursed is Father

Spreading seed

Spawning hate

In the computers of humanity

Awareness sleeps

The soul is dying

As synapses firing

Create illusions of separateness

The sheep shall sleep forever more



[edit on 4/14/2009 by dalan.]



posted on Apr, 14 2009 @ 09:44 AM
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Taste the Sun

A kingdom battles to taste the sun
The peace of the forest floor is a facade
Masking the tumultuous war of forms
As above, so below
Consciousness battles for supremacy
Even in compassion
Survival reigns supreme
Witness the violence
As the Caiman takes delight
Shredding an esophagus to pieces
The death-roll is the dance of creation
God invented death
Take delight in destruction
And witness evolution unfold
Watch the violence
As a kingdom battles to taste the sun



posted on Apr, 21 2009 @ 02:54 PM
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Black Body Radiation

Within this shadow all hate consumes

A frozen Colossus left drifting

Ruminating on Creation's end

This dying black body in space

Brings forth its loathsome hate progeny

To douse the dancing luminosity

of bright sister stars

Listen for the whispers

The umbra offspring scream

A radiation chorus crescendoes

the language of babbling dreams

Madness in the dark spaces

Black body radiation brings

Madness in the dark spaces

Yahweh's cursed progeny sing



In the dark places between the stars, creatures with no mouths

Utter inter-dimensional nonsense

An absolute freezing chorus

of no sound heard in the dead space

[edit on 4/21/2009 by dalan.]



posted on May, 11 2009 @ 06:36 PM
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Pharmakia Eden

Gilded eyes by monetary value
blinded
Never see the truth for the forest are trees
Where money is growing
Monetarily crippling
Our lives
Relationships die
When they're too expensive to pay for
Can you feel your strings?
Can you feel your strings?
Can you feel your strings?
Can you feel your strings?
Puppet
Lost within this Pharmakia
Our Eden we've built, it does deceive us
Pharmakia Eden
A manipulation paradise
Fertile lies have grown our paradise



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