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Dream (Poem)

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posted on Apr, 9 2009 @ 10:51 PM
I thought I'd try and post another poem here. Just to see what you all think and just to post it anyway.
This is one of my better ones or so I think and I tend to have it memorized.

It is called:


Shall night befall her troubled mind
And doubt prevail no more
She enters in a world sublime
And leave's her life before

A world of will she towers on
Finding all she seeks
All penetrating lies now gone
A future not so bleak

But bliss so sweet will surely fade
As darkness cracks the sky
While exiting the world she made
She wakes and wonders why

Thinking how surreal life seemed
She lays down her sweet head
And fathoms for another dream
Without life filled with dread

posted on Apr, 10 2009 @ 01:39 PM
reply to post by N3krostatic

Very nicely done and thought provoking.

I enjoyed it very much.


posted on Apr, 10 2009 @ 08:35 PM
reply to post by hsur2112

Thank you for the compliment.

Much appreciated.

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