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Broken Man (poetic)

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posted on Mar, 29 2009 @ 01:53 AM
How many I am sorries
can erase the pain
how many broken hearts
crying tears like rain

Years have come and gone
the pain still lingers there
deep within my soul
it really isn't fair

You must be happy
my heart you did take
but I think you pay a price
for every heart you break

Some one will do to you
the things you did to me
maybe when that happens
you will finally see

Pain and love
should not go hand in hand
and when its time to pay up
you'll be a broken man.

posted on Apr, 7 2009 @ 08:01 AM
I loved it.

Very nice. Illustrates how love cuts both ways.

Reminds me of an old fav. But I enjoyed yours just as much.

A mighty pain to love it is,
And 'tis a pain that pain to miss;
But of all pains, the greatest pain
It is to love, but love in vain.
Abraham Cowley

More please.

Kind regards........KK (S & F )

posted on Apr, 9 2009 @ 09:22 PM
reply to post by kinda kurious

Thank you! I have many, I've only to get the nerve to post them! Thanks again for your kind words and I am glad that you liked it!!

posted on Apr, 9 2009 @ 10:00 PM
Very nice! I quite enjoyed that and definitely felt it.

Keep it up! I too have my own little collection. Perhaps I'll post more.

posted on Apr, 9 2009 @ 10:46 PM
reply to post by N3krostatic

Thank you! I will certainly take the time to read them, I love poetry! Thank you for reading and glad you liked it!

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