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Originally posted by wildtimes
As for the character development of the individuals -- I can only say that is to be expected. If the characters all stay the same forever they're too flat. I've wondered why there isn't more "processing" happening...for example, I was glad to see neno cry. I was glad to see Dag have a crisis of infatuation, to see Adam have some doubts. Frustration is part of good character writing, in my opinion...I focus on it.
I have only two questions:
Is character growth and development not a focus on this project?
And what happened to the Penelope?
As far as the character/story development, I can only give my own opinions. I believe development is the important part. Both character growth and story line progress. In my mind, any good story follows the characters and their responses, growth, and meeting challenges. All stories involve conflict of some sort. That is what MAKES the story happen. The specific genre is just a vehicle - a bed to lay the story in. Whether a western, a mystery, sci-fi, romance, or whatever genre you have, the story itself is developed by conflict and response leading to resolution. All else is only a framework to support the story and the characters. Gilgamesh of the Sumerians... Conan of Robert E. Howard... Louis L'Amour's Sacketts... Sam Spade... all these characters seem to be disparate, and are to a degree because of their responses - but NOT because of the genre they were written into! The genre and it's accoutrements are just vehicles, frameworks. The story is in the development, conflict, and resolution. Whether the hero ride a horse, a chariot, a Lamborghini or a laser tank, the character is STILL the character.
Oh - and you do have the 'background' - if you wish to. It's right there in the story line. Click page 1 and go from there.
In my mind, any good story follows the characters and their responses, growth, and meeting challenges.
Originally posted by silo13
In my mind, any good story follows the characters and their responses, growth, and meeting challenges.
Of course - as long as the character remains in character while growing.
peace
Originally posted by silo13
* Ok great - so that’s gonna be the guy. I guess what I was asking, and worded badly, is the Dark Lord still ‘out there’ and as big a bad dude as he once was - or - is this new ‘dude’ bigger and badder than the Dark Lord ever had a chance of being? I guess time will tell!
*Ok, so they’re still ‘out there’ and we may or may not come into contact with them. Obviously I’m still having a bit of a mind cramp over the big rip. Let’s just pretend I never asked.
*Gotcha. So she’d either dead or of no consequence. The reasons why Bransom was after her was only because Silo escaped LAB and became a security risk - it was never explained why.
Neno is going back to where he will have his ‘place to go when there’s no place else to go’. That seems to be the thread of where the story lime is going. What I’m asking is - I hope we can tie in CindyMars with this as she obviously wanted ‘something’ from Neno - maybe now we know what it is!
*Good to know. I was under the impression we could write for those who left without dying. I’ll either U2U him to find out or...well...I’m not sure. Thanks for the heads-up.
*Could be that or could be something to do with your planet. Maybe the mining operation there produces the material she needs to make those teleport tab/crystals of hers? That’s she only has one left of by the way. (Maybe we’ll encounter here there on the planet)???
*Could you explain what you mean about ‘it might be bad’? I don’t see her ever going ‘rogue’ (she already is after escaping the Federation and their plans to exterminate her). We just have to keep her calm. She’s never been an controlling witch and there’s no reason for her to be now other than her little internal tiff’s with her intimates. Point being?
*Will do! I use ‘Federation’ too freely in my thoughts without being more explicit.
Originally posted by silo13
In my mind, any good story follows the characters and their responses, growth, and meeting challenges.
Of course - as long as the character remains in character while growing.
peace
Originally posted by wildtimes
obviously I watch shows like Leverage and the Closer and Cold Case....
... It appears currently to be "Cormorant" or "Carmarthien" or "Cocobolo" or whatever that cat's name is
OR Bransom may have been after "alien tech", for her own enrichment and aggrandizement.
I love "The Closer" - that woman has balls that would choke a cannon to death!
Is BIAD’s ‘past’ going to come out more in the storyline? N- I hope so.
Especially with his mention of trying to find his father's killers,
it would make for a good story arc all by itself.
The UEF Background Thread has some "canonical" information from the perspective of the UEF. There are some characterizations of UEF personnel, some background in Galactography and the structures of the various political units (with some maps for orientation), and mf_luder has written a short (5 pages or so) synopsis of the UEF history that can be downloaded from that page as a PDF file, as well as a synopsis of the now missing Penelope, with information on her (also as a PDF download).
True, our gunslinging-pal is not only immortal -but also difficult to poke with
a stick.
That means this chap will look to make Neno doubt, make him think
that if his friends
Originally posted by A boy in a dress
reply to post by nenothtu
... It appears currently to be "Cormorant" or "Carmarthien" or "Cocobolo" or whatever that cat's name is
Originally posted by silo13
reply to post by nenothtu
OR Bransom may have been after "alien tech", for her own enrichment and aggrandizement.
Bare breasted amazon warrioress-es (sp?) charging in to battle comes to mind and when that fury's added to a fleet of test tube chickies with the ability to morph into anything they wanted? Yeah, they would constitute quite a force to recon with, lol. Maybe that's what Bransom was up to after all!
peace
... Bare breasted amazon warrioress-es