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The Space Opera Working Thread

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posted on Jun, 15 2009 @ 07:11 PM
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reply to post by tothetenthpower
 


Well I can try. Not sure exactly what you want or how soon I can GET ER DONE?




posted on Jun, 15 2009 @ 07:24 PM
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Luder:

As long none of this kills anyone than I'm ok with it. I'm trying to make Studious not be a killer.


Accidental or otherwise....




Edits to previous post are as follows...

FX movie channel had to edit the famous snakes on a plane line to make it this...

"I'VE HAD IT WITH THESE MONKEY FIGHTIN' SNAKES ON THIS MONDAY TO FRIDAY PLANE!"

They even make T-shirts of it now.


TV Edit T-Shirt




Mother as in mother not anything else.

“How in the name of Zeus’ MOTHER did you get out of your cell!?”

"You mean his mother Rhea?"

"Yes, I do!"

“Oh, I can't they're Trade secrets.”



Here the word is simply removed...

"Thanks old chap,........BUT THAT'S MY CANE!"

[edit on 15-6-2009 by Studious]



posted on Jun, 15 2009 @ 07:30 PM
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I wasn't planning on it killing anyone. The tertiary explosion that was caused from your minor one may have done some nasty things - but I'll leave that up to Slayer.

After all - this mechanical beasty is his baby.

I just throw wrenches into the gears every once in a while



posted on Jun, 15 2009 @ 07:34 PM
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EDIT:

Thanks for clearing that up I got worried there for a moment.

I've made it possible, at least in Studious' mind, to save the ship. (But Luder is still holding those wrenches.
)

I figured Studious couldn't just do nothing and therefore decided I still needed parts of the post.

So I've re-re-edited it so that Studious was not captured or seen but only heard. Fitting with the everyone thinks the "Colonel" is dead storyline I was going down before.

Code Brown was mentioned in Luder's USS Penelope Specifications and Procedures pdf. document.

EDIT:

[edit on 15-6-2009 by Studious]

[edit on 15-6-2009 by Studious]

[edit on 15-6-2009 by Studious]



posted on Jun, 15 2009 @ 10:15 PM
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Here Penelope is at yet ANOTHER unscheduled, and probably unknown, stop, for the second time in this tour...

Requesting permission to start mapping these out-of-the-way vacation retreats, Cap'n. There's a fortune we could be making in the relaxation and tourism industries...


Neno's dear old dad told him he'd be seeing the universe if he joined the space service, but I ain't sure that this is QUITE what he had in mind...


Oh, and Studious - nenothtu is gonna have that cane hanging on his wall for a trophy some day...


[edit on 2009/6/15 by nenothtu]



posted on Jun, 15 2009 @ 11:44 PM
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In doing some review preparatory to writing up my next post, I realized that engine controls are out, coolant relays are blown, and this has caused a shutdown of main engines. Studious' repair of the power grid won't fix that, because of the coolant relays being blown. Engines properly ought not to be able to function without coolant, hence the reason for the shutdown.

We have 90 seconds to stop a corkscrew into the planetary surface, and less than that before we hit atmo, at which time the main engines are jettisoned to prevent massive implosion in the immediate ship's vicinity. (ref: "Code Brown", Penelope Operations Manual, mf_luder, ATS, 2009)

The Pucker Factor just increased ten-fold.

I sure hope we have some kind of attitude adjustment 'rockets' to halt the movement before... well, you know...


[edit on 2009/6/15 by nenothtu]



posted on Jun, 16 2009 @ 01:41 AM
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Originally posted by SLAYER69

Muahahahahaha.

Just be careful tenth Every captain so far has gone AWOL on us.


It reminds me of the Harry Potter books. No Dark Arts teacher gets past one year.
Maybe they need a member write for the ship and forget about a captain.
It would be like Farscape with voiceover from Moya.

That could be interesting.



posted on Jun, 16 2009 @ 01:52 AM
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Ship not evil but we all have our stuff.


I agree she isn't evil, but, might have issues... (Sounds like my mother)...

You've a U2U - I hope you get it.
Not sure if people are getting U2U's lately or if it's a good excuse not to respond...

Not you of course CindyMars!

[edit on 16-6-2009 by silo13]



posted on Jun, 16 2009 @ 02:04 AM
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To the Penelope Crew...

Is it a possibility that one of your Men *Took* Scurvy somehow and is hiding him somewhere?

(Planted a RFID tag on him and beamed him up once back on the Penny)?

It would give Scurvy a hell of an entrance later to *bust out*...

Could there be an ominous mysterious post with speakers who are not identified placing Scurvy in the brig there.


“Quick, move him into the brig and watch to make sure no one sees you!"

*Done! He replies sotto voice. "How do I make sure he doesn’t make contact with the guards*

“Put him in solitary. Place droid guards on him to keep him fed and watered and order the men away...*


That kind of freaky horrid thing to get back at Rigelians for eating humans!

That would take care of a lot of problems and give us a chance to meet up again later too...

What does the Yydryl think of that???


[edit on 16-6-2009 by silo13]



posted on Jun, 16 2009 @ 03:35 AM
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lol

erm....

"Beam?"

We don't have beamers.... or transporters.....

Sorry.

lol

Maybe Studious put him in his pocket on the way back out.



posted on Jun, 16 2009 @ 05:27 AM
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Originally posted by mf_luder
reply to post by silo13
 


lol

erm....

"Beam?"

We don't have beamers.... or transporters.....

Sorry.

lol

Maybe Studious put him in his pocket on the way back out.


Just like Studious to shanghai an alien Captain, ain't it? He seems not to play well with the one he has, might be looking to draft a replacement...



posted on Jun, 16 2009 @ 06:37 AM
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No transporters


What kind of an outfit your running there!



Ok so he coshed him on his head?

(I'm really stretching here huh, lol...)


EDIT:

UGH! Got to go! Be back to edit my post in the Story later! Sorry!


[edit on 16-6-2009 by silo13]



posted on Jun, 16 2009 @ 02:04 PM
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Hey whose slacking on the stars?

Hmmmmm?????

I am still just a starring all!

Antar, youwoo, where are ye?



posted on Jun, 16 2009 @ 02:09 PM
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I'mg going now, I'm going now


Edit: There we go, all starred. Love that post by the way, I really enjoy your take on 2010 and the way you and silo are collaborating, very well done
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~Keeper

[edit on 6/16/2009 by tothetenthpower]



posted on Jun, 16 2009 @ 02:15 PM
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Thank you Tenth, we are having fun and that is what it's all about.
You and Mythiana Jones could do some crazy stuff.

Did you change your appearance yet?
Keep those eye's ok?


Hey Penelope what about letting your ship crash and the Yydryl has to pick you all up? Just a thought. You can go back and get her later.



[edit on 16-6-2009 by cindymars]



posted on Jun, 16 2009 @ 02:42 PM
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I'm actually writing the change in right now, it should be up in an hour or so. But it will take time. It's going to be like a cocoon process, and in the meantime I'm gong to divulge some of Adilaris' dark history.

I think it will work out well, give the readers some background in the form of flashbacks and OBE's.

~Keeper



posted on Jun, 16 2009 @ 03:00 PM
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UGH!
Am I the only one who has to do my final edit here on ATS?
I swear I must of changed my last post like 42 times already...

I wish there was a way I could *see* the post in it's final form before actually posting it...

And yeah Cim - it's been great working with you - it makes the Space Opera really a pleasure...



Keeper, thanks for the encouragement for Cim and I...
By the way you going to have a pic of the new you?



posted on Jun, 16 2009 @ 03:09 PM
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Originally posted by silo13

By the way you going to have a pic of the new you?



Yup, I'm getting Slayer to make my new Avatar, So I will be in statis until it is done, so I can wound my post around that.

I'll be dealing with my past for the next couple of days until he's done
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~Keeper



posted on Jun, 16 2009 @ 03:17 PM
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Originally posted by silo13
UGH!
Am I the only one who has to do my final edit here on ATS?
I swear I must of changed my last post like 42 times already...

I wish there was a way I could *see* the post in it's final form before actually posting it...


Keeper, thanks for the encouragement for Cim and I...
By the way you going to have a pic of the new you?



Don't you have a preview button?

I use word and edit , spell check , re-read then copy and paste. After that I use preview and still end up doing edits.



posted on Jun, 16 2009 @ 03:23 PM
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Yeah BadgerB's but I can't seem to *see* it correctly until it's really posted...

By the way loved your last post.






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