The Darkness Falls (a poem), page 1
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reply posted on 10-4-2009 @ 08:42 PM by N3krostatic
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I had to reply to this one.

Honestly that was amazing. I'm not just being nice. lol
I'm sometimes a little dark in my poetic approach but the ending was perfect!
Kind of reminds me of something from the book of counted sorrows!




reply posted on 10-4-2009 @ 08:46 PM by chapter29
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The blue skies turned a sickening gray
the lush green forests
cut down and paved






Both the message and wording are tops...


Good stuff...



reply posted on 6-5-2009 @ 11:12 PM by Greenize
reply to post by jenny21



Thank you and yes I do. I have several scattered around, mostly in the short stories forum. Thanks again!!


reply posted on 6-5-2009 @ 11:15 PM by Greenize
reply to post by Deus Ex Machina 42


Feel free to interpret anyway you like...I hadn't thought of that, but it works! Thank you for reading and commenting, I appreciate it!

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