Silence (a poem of sorts) , page 1
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reply posted on 8-3-2009 @ 03:05 PM by Greenize
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Thank you!! I do already have two entries in the contest. This one just came to me a bit ago...I am glad you liked it!



reply posted on 8-3-2009 @ 03:11 PM by pluckynoonez
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Reminds me of Portishead:

Silence



Esteja alerta para as regras dos 3 O que você dá, retornará para você Essa lição você tem que aprender Você só ganha o que você merece Tempted in our minds Tormented in silence Wounded, I'm afraid inside my head Falling through changes Did you know when you lost? Did you know when I wanted? Did you know what I lost? Do you know what I wanted? Empty in our hearts Crying out in silence Wandered out of reach, too far to speak Drifting, unable. Did you know when you lost? Did you know when I wanted? Did you know what I lost? Do you know what I wanted?


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Music is poetry as poetry is music.

What was the inspiration for your poem? I mean, other than drawing my own conclusions from the text.


reply posted on 8-3-2009 @ 03:29 PM by Greenize
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To be honest with you, I was thinking about going back to work tomorrow...lol I work with the public and at times I have to escape inside my own self to drown out the "noise"... There are days that are draining on me mentally...listening to viewpoints and beliefs and life histories...I don't mean to sound hateful, I don't mind at the time, but it gets to me...
Thanks for reading!
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