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reply posted on 3-3-2009 @ 01:37 AM by space cadet
reply to post by worldwatcher



History repeats itself time and time again
I wish this fact would change.
As a child, fear of War, Bombs, and acid rain
As we rode bikes on the military range.
Knowing too much about nuclear war
as a kid is just not right
Fear itself is at the core
And makes it hard to sleep at night.
The music screamed 'we want peace'
from a generation wanting change
Civility restored and Vietnam ceased.
But lives had been rearanged.
Sex drugs and rock and roll
became the things to do
Turbulance gave way to those
And you know, we never knew,
all these years would pass to see
the same things come again
War, Bombs and money this time
I think I would prefer the acid rain!
And again, we scream for change.



edit to add: I hope ya'll like it!

[edit on 3-3-2009 by space cadet]

[edit on 3-3-2009 by space cadet]


reply posted on 3-3-2009 @ 02:33 AM by Wormwood Squirm
reply to post by worldwatcher



Title: We All Fall Down

I will always remember the green dollar bill
and of my house I had on the hill
working paycheck to paycheck and paying my bills
so I could have a big TV with all the frills

then it all came down
like a smile turned to frown
we were suckered by bunch of banker clowns



[edit on 3-3-2009 by Wormwood Squirm]



reply posted on 3-3-2009 @ 02:59 AM by ExquisitExamplE
&

my heart light burns vindictive cinders
my head mind finds a place adjacent
all fractals act as an actual example
raise my hands lucid infusion
color the latent faded ageless
when the time comes i will be ready
steady measure the leisure gesture
invest your time in spirit
can you hear it
he speaks in a secret frequency
open your heart to love light
dove flight
some sight is meant to be hidden
you cannot hear if you cannot listen
this is a world of much beauty rudely awakened
men as creatures must be trained for the remainder
where do i stand in this land of abandon
i am a culture shock product document
a monument to the last days of a failing fabric
weave the trees with a new fusion of leaves
i've seen a great fractal spiral light the night sky
it explodes from the center of my spine chakra
i imagine a tangible thing and manifest catalyst
drown the foundation and cement your intention
learn your lesson in this lifetime and move to the next vector
stage two becomes phase three for the fourth quarter horse
grab the reins and proclaim the son of man tour de force
align the planetary defiance righteous assignment
find it within and tear it out shouting valiant
i've made this place so that i may erase it
face it

\\\

You may ask yourself how does this have anything to do with reminiscing upon the days of old? These days the are the oldest I have seen, but in between those days I have seen live and green. Lush. Fetid. How does one man draw lines within angles? Tangential mentor vetted his pence. Are you so dense that the fence binds our movement? On the day I became constricted I set out for improvement. Exuded the movement from the depths of his trachea. I don't fake it i shake from the anger the stranger is nigh wild and.

Pleased to meet you.


reply posted on 3-3-2009 @ 03:13 AM by ExquisitExamplE
reply to post by fooffstarr



Awesome poem! Honestly, I've only read a few so far, but yours is brilliant! It really gives me that simple, honest, humble type of feeling. I liken it to cooking and indeed all the arts: "If its simple, but still cooked well, the results are more often than not, outstanding; That's not to say your poem is without depth, often times the most simple of objectionable arrangement can be the most challenging, think japanese rock garden. Again, well done, I especially enjoyed the frisbee device.
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