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reply posted on 17-2-2009 @ 08:07 AM by nyk537
Take a look at your article now.

The Energy Farm

Notice some of the changes I have made. (adding an image, making proper headings for sources, etc.)

I would try to come up with a way to separate all of your information into sections. Right now it's just one big block of text, which can be intimidated to a lot of people.
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