I was born under a full moon
A Monday
In the tropic of Cancer
The moon takes me
Sweeps me away
on torrent rides
Leaving me to drift the tides
To be born under this sign
With the moon full on a Monday
That is a burden no man should bare
For the Tropic of Cancer is a lonely place to fair
Edit to ask if it sucked.  and to fix some stuff
[edit on 14-2-2009 by LoneGunMan]
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Sounds good to me. Not a poetic person so unfortunately can't add but, poetic of enough to enjoy. 
