BTS.music: This is for my Critics

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This is for my Critics

Here's the lyrics from a song that I *JUST* did.

My buddy Matt made the beat (www.free-instrumentals.com...)

I wrote and recorded it.. think this is the third attempt.. No editing done.






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status: live (at time of posting)

and here are the lyrics.

D|NeRo - This is for my critics

bow down in-dust-streets i see haters and the likes of these
fleas and ticks hill billies and beetnecks imitating these scripts

bow down in-dust-streets i hear bull# and fear, but it's clear see
nobodies gettin' near me new world ordered that I AM. free

bow down in-dust-streets i feel the pressure's surreal,
and we'll wake up and shake up the sign and seal and sharpen
the steel to cut their Achilles' heel up

bow down in-dust-streets i sense self-prophesied ends
philosophized trends and monstrous sized mends on wounds
attuned to trans.scend

bow down in-dust-streets i smell what death knows so well
but no one'll tell those consigned to hell, froze, kid's
condemned to cells closed

bow down in-dust-streets i taste the garbage and waste
conveniently placed out of sight out of mind that we chase
embraced until the youth's crying

bow down industries I face traced to lies and crime embraced
defiance and blind faith in theories and pseudo-science
laced facts

bow down industries I hate soon erased or replaced in it's
place an estate to desecrate those checker plate foes who
underestimate roses from concrete. we're so beyond leet
outshine the sun and a strong heat we greet those with &
know we throw the first blows kid

reply to post by PuRe EnErGy


Very cool.

Reminds me of a cross between Michael Franti/Spearhead and fun lovin' criminals.
Great job man


[edit on 12/1/09 by blupblup]

thanks man, I appreciate it a lot, it's been awhile since I've recorded anything.

reply to post by PuRe EnErGy
##yeah i liked that a lot

Hey Pure Energy is that you on vocals dear?

Ps. Love the lyrics man.

- Carrot

very chill. thanks for posting.

Originally posted by CA_Orot
Hey Pure Energy is that you on vocals dear?

Ps. Love the lyrics man.

- Carrot

Yes dear it is.. :$

.thisisnotaoneliner.

[edit on 1/14/2009 by PuRe EnErGy]

lol I really liked it. It was very mellow, and your voice is great for that type of song with those kinds of lyrics.

- Carrot

Thank you very much CA_Orot :$

if anyone else likes it please flag it so other people can hear it :p

You all rule btw, thanks!

Nice one man. I can see where blupblup is coming from with the spearhead comment.

IRM

Loved it. Wish there had been more of it. Very chilled and you sound good on it.

Theres some real talent on ATS these days

Thanks a lot guys, I've got a few other beats now and some from some generous listeners and I hope to have a few more recorded shortly here.

Once again thanks for the amazing replies!

Wow pretty awesome job man

Keep it up.

Thanks a lot everyone!

I really appreciate ALL the support and Motivation...

I hope to really step up my music production here in the next few months when everything works out for me financially so I have enough time to dedicate to it.