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posted on Jan, 12 2009 @ 04:14 PM

This is for my Critics

Here's the lyrics from a song that I *JUST* did.

My buddy Matt made the beat (

I wrote and recorded it.. think this is the third attempt.. No editing done.

length: 01:54
file: btsmpod_3187.mp3
size: 1784k
feed: btsm
status: live (at time of posting)

posted on Jan, 12 2009 @ 04:16 PM
and here are the lyrics.

D|NeRo - This is for my critics

bow down in-dust-streets i see haters and the likes of these
fleas and ticks hill billies and beetnecks imitating these scripts

bow down in-dust-streets i hear bull# and fear, but it's clear see
nobodies gettin' near me new world ordered that I AM. free

bow down in-dust-streets i feel the pressure's surreal,
and we'll wake up and shake up the sign and seal and sharpen
the steel to cut their Achilles' heel up

bow down in-dust-streets i sense self-prophesied ends
philosophized trends and monstrous sized mends on wounds
attuned to trans.scend

bow down in-dust-streets i smell what death knows so well
but no one'll tell those consigned to hell, froze, kid's
condemned to cells closed

bow down in-dust-streets i taste the garbage and waste
conveniently placed out of sight out of mind that we chase
embraced until the youth's crying

bow down industries I face traced to lies and crime embraced
defiance and blind faith in theories and pseudo-science
laced facts

bow down industries I hate soon erased or replaced in it's
place an estate to desecrate those checker plate foes who
underestimate roses from concrete. we're so beyond leet
outshine the sun and a strong heat we greet those with &
know we throw the first blows kid

posted on Jan, 12 2009 @ 04:18 PM
reply to post by PuRe EnErGy

Very cool.

Reminds me of a cross between Michael Franti/Spearhead and fun lovin' criminals.
Great job man

[edit on 12/1/09 by blupblup]

posted on Jan, 12 2009 @ 04:46 PM
thanks man, I appreciate it a lot, it's been awhile since I've recorded anything.

posted on Jan, 12 2009 @ 05:05 PM
reply to post by PuRe EnErGy
##yeah i liked that a lot

posted on Jan, 13 2009 @ 11:51 PM
Hey Pure Energy is that you on vocals dear?

Ps. Love the lyrics man.

- Carrot

posted on Jan, 13 2009 @ 11:53 PM
very chill. thanks for posting.

posted on Jan, 14 2009 @ 12:57 AM

Originally posted by CA_Orot
Hey Pure Energy is that you on vocals dear?

Ps. Love the lyrics man.

- Carrot

Yes dear it is.. :$


[edit on 1/14/2009 by PuRe EnErGy]

posted on Jan, 14 2009 @ 01:12 AM
I really liked it. It was very mellow, and your voice is great for that type of song with those kinds of lyrics.

- Carrot

posted on Jan, 14 2009 @ 05:04 AM
Thank you very much CA_Orot :$

if anyone else likes it please flag it so other people can hear it :p

You all rule btw, thanks!

posted on Jan, 15 2009 @ 01:14 AM
Nice one man. I can see where blupblup is coming from with the spearhead comment.


posted on Jan, 15 2009 @ 06:19 AM
Loved it. Wish there had been more of it. Very chilled and you sound good on it.

Theres some real talent on ATS these days

posted on Jan, 17 2009 @ 05:39 AM
Thanks a lot guys, I've got a few other beats now and some from some generous listeners and I hope to have a few more recorded shortly here.

Once again thanks for the amazing replies!

posted on Jan, 24 2009 @ 09:37 PM
Wow pretty awesome job man

Keep it up.

posted on Jul, 13 2009 @ 02:45 PM
Thanks a lot everyone!

I really appreciate ALL the support and Motivation...

I hope to really step up my music production here in the next few months when everything works out for me financially so I have enough time to dedicate to it.

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