The JoKeR (a poem), page 1

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Topic started on 26-12-2008 @ 11:37 PM by Greenize

Standing on the outside
blankly looking in
put my head on backwards
just to see where I have been...
I'm feeling kind of dizzy
my mind is lost in space
I wonder if it misses me...
if it misses the rat race
What the hell you looking at
do I look strange to you
guess what little buddy
your heads on backwards too...
Does this mean we are normal
who am I to say
I'm just the joker in the deck
thrown aside to never play...
What the hell you laughing at
you think its funny really
you get a kick from others pain
and you think that I am silly...
I better screw my head on right
and watch for things to come
yeah maybe I'm a joker
but at least I am not dumb...
or maybe....

reply posted on 27-12-2008 @ 01:02 AM by One_of_Manny

reply to post by Greenize

Out of the deck of cards, its wise to be a ace.
Dont be a king. Dont be a worthless fool.
Its better to be above the king and below the king at the same time. Dont get into the power struggle but keep your riches and gain wisdom. = Above the king. Highest Lowest card. Be a wise middle class peasant. No longer a fool.

God through a nobody saved the world, now I'm on disability. I dont even know how I saved the world. I guess I was not the only one who saved the world...Just one of the parts of GODS plan to create the time line that we have now. I was a fool just following along with human stupidity and gods help doing the best I could. Ego is how the negative side of the force can manipulate you. Oh your so awesome...Your the chosen one. Gods side of the force is the chosen. I passes with flying colors. Every one should be king. True democracy.
Iv retired my mystical Christ consciousness powers...hehe. Put it in the hands of GOD, and the people who's job it is to save the world.

Wiser now.
Thanks Angels On GODS side of the force.

- a wise peasant.

[edit on 27-12-2008 by One_of_Manny]

reply posted on 4-1-2009 @ 02:41 PM by TheDarkHorse

Greenize, I really enjoyed reading that, I truly did. I have been a member here forever but only discovered this section and I'm like a kid in a candy store. Poetry and writing have always been so therapeutic for me, I've always just wrote. The Joker is a real gem, thanks for sharing.

reply posted on 21-1-2009 @ 04:52 PM by worldwatcher

loved it!!!

well written and deep even though on the surface it's only about a playing card..or is it?

well done

reply posted on 21-1-2009 @ 06:44 PM by Greenize

reply to post by TheDarkHorse

You just made my day, you really did!!
Thank you so much! I may post some more, I have lots!

reply posted on 21-1-2009 @ 06:47 PM by Greenize

reply to post by worldwatcher

Thank you very much! I appreciate that more than you know. It isn't about cards really...Its about having a feeling of not belonging and being left out...I'm a sucker for the underdog!