reply to post by Frankidealist35
Hi there,well Ive had a look at your site and this is my imput,,the first thing that I thought when I saw your first page is,,alot of writing and
nothing stands out to catch my eye,,if I just came across your site by chance then I dont think I would have read anymore,,,You have to think what
kind of people you want to attract,,and the subjects you want to have on there,,make each page look interesting and eye catching,maybe a couple of the
first sentences of each page can be in caps.
And maybe you could add a song to each page that goes with what your saying.
I think your first page should be a short biography about yourself and topics you will cover and go on another page.
Take a look at my site and that might give you some ideas