reply to post by Ishma
ok here's the thing. I'm not a big believer in this Annunaki lark, but that's besides the point.
What you've presented here is very unfriendly to the reader, and this is seriously impairing peoples ability to read it. It could be revolutionary...
most of us will never know because we have better things to do than to wade through such a difficult-to-read document.
There's little punctuation. I mean, how can anyone digest a 20-odd line opening sentence?
There are no paragraphs.
The great myriad of ideas you present are lumped in together. There's no discernable structure.
You haven't used a spell checker.
my suggestions:
1/ Format your text. break it down into sentences and paragraphs. Use headers between paragraphs as you move to a new part of your argument.
2/ as its a long document, write a brief synopsis/review as the opening paragraph. Describe what it is that you are going to tell us with this
document. Present your general conclusion in this opening paragraph. Tell it to us like we're 5 year olds. Keep it short and simple.
3/ Do a spellcheck.
4/ come back here and post your material. Post the first xxxx words as a new thread. post the rest of it as replies to the original post.
5/ forget about embedded flash. open a free blogger.com or wordpress.com blogging account, post it there. You will also be able to access statistics
there on how many people have read your stuff. And of course you can post more stuff there as you see fit.
Cheers
==UPDATE==
aah... looking at the comments I see you have Aspergers. So you perhaps have difficulty in presenting things in a way in a format which others think
more appropriate.
My advice above still stands: synopsis, paragraphs, short sentences, headlines.
[edit on 29-11-2008 by eniac]