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Poem for my wife

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posted on Aug, 20 2008 @ 05:24 PM
Ohhh how the years have passed
here is a poem i wrote for my wife, oh so long ago:

In the beginning was God
Then he created Man
and created an entire planet
Then he made a plan

So for a while
the plan went okay
and man tread the earth
day after day.

then one day
man paid God a visit
and asked for a partner
Oh! How he wished it

So out came the rib
God Created girl
To accompany man
in his journeys through the world

So to quicky wrap up
this valentine's poem
I'm glad God made YOU
so i won't have to be alone

You make me a different man
and i thank God for you
You perk up my day
When i'm feeling blue

So in closing
ill leave you with this...
I love you very much ...
X for a hug and a big O for a kiss

posted on Aug, 20 2008 @ 05:59 PM
reply to post by Andrew E. Wiggin


Where's MY husband's poem?!!!!

Actually he doesn't post here much.

posted on Aug, 20 2008 @ 06:03 PM
reply to post by Andrew E. Wiggin

Nice, well done sir!

I am cutting and pasting as we speak. Will save for a rainy day. No credit to you will be given.

posted on Aug, 20 2008 @ 06:05 PM
reply to post by schrodingers dog


Its okay - its very veyr old

I think she may have forgotten about it

Its not very good.....but i wanted to test my feet in the BTS area for a while

No credit needed

posted on Aug, 20 2008 @ 06:20 PM
It's pretty good.

If done properly, It'd make a good love song too. Good work.

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