I agree with others about the writing. I found that hard to read. I'm definitely not good at writing or spelling (I did quite bad in school), but I
do my best and always proof read and spell check when I'm not sure about a word.
It also helps to write in paragraphs. Keeps things cleaner and more organized looking. You're not really helping yourself with the way you have
presented your information. With your 180 IQ i'd expect more. Just take the extra few minutes to proof read. It'll be worth it. There is no reason
to rush to post your story, if you really want people to believe you and take you seriously, you should take your writing seriously. I can totaly
understand the occasional typo or misspelling or what have you, but I must say what you wrote is a bit of a mess.
But with all that said. I found your story interesting. You should continue to look into it, if you believe their is reason to suspicious. Talk to
your Mom about Aliens and the like and that sort of thing and study her reaction. Though maybe she just finds the idea of other life out there
disturbing, who knows. Keep updating us with things you find.




