suggestion: remove "And we stood. In the warmth of that which is not explained" and replace with...
And we stood. Basking in our mutual warmth radiatingly concentrated from within our shared hearts, our love-induced heat separated us from the
isolative cold weather. Our bodies were energized by the very presence of each other, and our vibrations matched the response from our emotions for
one another. Quite simply and symbolically, we createad energy within the chilled vacuum of winter by doing nothing other than looking at each
As we stood together, we grew warmer. Our feelings of love increased as we gazed into each others' eyes. Now she seemed to understand, as had I.
She spoke softly,
"Now, I believe I understand. Love is something that is naturally embedded into us. Love is the best emotional state for us to be in and to deny it
would be similar to denying existence."
My fingers, still trembling with a mixture of tension and the coldness from the frozen ambience around us, suddenly became vibrant, as if guided by a
higher source. I wanted to touch her. I wanted to feel her resonance and share more of our warmth together. I loved her.
"I love you," She said with utmost sincerity, but not obnoxiously, "Come closer to me and let us enjoy a moment of eternity together."
Awestruck, I stood there, contemplating on how I should react. I decided to go with my instincts and embraced her for a kiss. What became seconds
eventually turned into minutes. What became minutes eventually turned into hours. Truly in a blissful state, I understood what she meant by enjoying
eternity, if only for a limited time. Being in her presence was heavenly, and sharing her warmth with mine really made me feel that I had lost my lock
on time. During that period, there was nothing outside of that love. There was no cold. There were no background noises. There were no external
sensations. All that existed was us, it seemed, and inexplicably so, as we shared the most powerful emotion in a mutual fashion.
Finally, the internal tension and the chill dominating most of my body was gone. My fingers trembled no more... (your cue)