I really enjoyed that. You remind me of a friend of mine that freestyles like a madman. Great job man! I love that beat.
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Topic started on 14-7-2008 @ 11:34 PM by depth om
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ATS rap contest entry
recorded somehow on a handheld voice recorder.
It might not sound too great depending on your speakers, lol it might sound bad regardless
if you like it you can vote on it in the thread
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PODcast: MKnegate
ATS rap contest entry
recorded somehow on a handheld voice recorder.
It might not sound too great depending on your speakers, lol it might sound bad regardless
if you like it you can vote on it in the thread
length: 07:43
file: btsmpod_3005.mp3
size: 9050k
feed: btsm
status: live (at time of posting)
reply posted on 6-7-2009 @ 05:56 PM by LucidDreamer85
Originally posted by depth om
MKnegate
ATS rap contest entry
recorded somehow on a handheld voice recorder.
It might not sound too great depending on your speakers, lol it might sound bad regardless
if you like it you can vote on it in the thread
length: 07:43
file: btsmpod_3005.mp3
size: 9050k
feed: btsm
status: live (at time of posting)
sounds like your rapping lyrics from like 6 different songs interchangably....
I think you would be better sticking more to the tempo of the beat but for what it is it's not that bad...
Reminds me a bit of old Wu-tang which I'm a huge fan off.....
Lyrics remind me of GZA a bit...
Did you play the song through your speakers then record from that? that is what it sounds like...
The beat was pretty decent....I'm not a fan of that snare drum though....too generic for me I hear it everywhere..
But overall...First you had the balls to put yourself out here like that so props to that....
I still think you would reach your potential rhyming more on point and on beat....You can of sway off and vary a little bit.
You should break the ideas and concepts of those lyrics into about 4 different songs though, it would sound better IMO...
Good job though..
reply posted on 18-9-2009 @ 11:04 AM by depth om
reply to post by LucidDreamer85
Hey thanks man! Yes, this is what my brother told me, split it up into multiple ones. I did just connect like 4 bricks of rhyme. Thanks bro for the criticism! I did record it on a handheld voice recorder with the beat playing through speakers. Personally I despise this beat when I hear it now. hahaha man I would run out of breath and start getting all choppy... those 7 minute single runs are tough hahah!
Seriously though man thank you. I hadn't seen this comment till today.
PEACE
wait wait wait... is this song only like 2 minutes when it plays!? I downlaoded it and it cuts off about 4 minutes
[edit on 18-9-2009 by depth om]
Hey thanks man! Yes, this is what my brother told me, split it up into multiple ones. I did just connect like 4 bricks of rhyme. Thanks bro for the criticism! I did record it on a handheld voice recorder with the beat playing through speakers. Personally I despise this beat when I hear it now. hahaha man I would run out of breath and start getting all choppy... those 7 minute single runs are tough hahah!
Seriously though man thank you. I hadn't seen this comment till today.
PEACE
wait wait wait... is this song only like 2 minutes when it plays!? I downlaoded it and it cuts off about 4 minutes
[edit on 18-9-2009 by depth om]
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