Massacred My Muse, page 1

First, I apologize, as this is not my strongest work. I wrote it after the accompanying music was already finishes, so I had the restrictions of rhyme, rhythm, and verse.

However, this was pretty much inspired, beginning to end, by my time here at ATS. So this is a tribute to all my friends here who have made me such a conspiracy nut!

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::Massacred My Muse::

This house is crowded
Held happiness before
Her face is shrouded
thirsty but there's no more
When the end came around,
our fibers shaking from the sound
Not as much as we trembled
when we embraced the dark of the underground

She's Just crouching there
What's death when you no longer care?
Dry fields burn the leaves in the trees
All you ever knew is on its knees

Rice flew at your funeral
The devil finally found his bride
Didn't know what a b**** you'd be
Drink the lies let the innocent die
Black cats didn't seem so prevalent
Now we swim in broken mirrors
Didn't know there was this much blood in me
Evaporates and feeds the sea

Recall not knowing anything
Brain damage is surely bliss
Now truth has ruined everything
Good liars will be sorely missed

Rice flew at your funeral
The devil finally found his bride
Didn't know what a b**** you'd be
Drink the lies let innocence die

These ashes are so beautiful
I can see myself in you again
You can have what's left of me
I know how this one ends
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If you'd like to hear the "framing" of the poem in all its produced glory, go to THE GBC MYSPACE. There you can listen to the song, just click its name on the right.

Thanks for checkin it out! I welcome all good and bad reactions to it, so please criticize away (although it won't do much- its already pressed!).

Jace


[edit on 7/14/08 by SantaClaus]

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