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The Legend of Ortus Praesen

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posted on Jul, 12 2008 @ 11:41 AM
Hi everyone!
A couple of friends of mine got together a couple days ago and created a short story which is now posted in our website, but we do not have anyone to give us feedback on it. We would love if anyone can look over our story and give us suggestions on how we can improve or add to it. Thanks guys!

Heres the link to our story:

posted on Jul, 12 2008 @ 12:49 PM
The story is actually written in three perspectives

The Society

The Amnis Party

The Demons

posted on Jul, 12 2008 @ 01:33 PM
different people writing the different perspectives?

posted on Jul, 12 2008 @ 11:06 PM
yea, but all three stories are about 1 default story

posted on Jul, 13 2008 @ 01:54 AM
ah i see

really interesting; would really like to read more but needs some editing

a little confusing but probably because it is only the beginning

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