always been a strange story ive been facinated with, if i havent craped it too badly ill add a few others.
anything i should add to make it better let me know
go easy on me its my first tinwiki submission 
[edit on 2-7-2008 by Demandred]
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Children who are green 
Green Children of Woolpit
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Wow! This is really good for your first submission. Congratulations and welcome aboard tinWiki!  I will go over your entry more carefully now and
award you your points. But at first glance, it looks really good, especially for your first go around. 
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Originally posted by Demandred
anything i should add to make it better let me know
That is a very good article you have put together there. There are some minor issues with spelling, grammar and formatting, but really for your first
submission you should be very proud. I am giving you 4,000 pts for your first effort. If you make any more improvements, or you want to start editing
other articles, then go for it!
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