Wow! This is really good for your first submission. Congratulations and welcome aboard tinWiki! I will go over your entry more carefully now and
award you your points. But at first glance, it looks really good, especially for your first go around.
Originally posted by Demandred
anything i should add to make it better let me know
That is a very good article you have put together there. There are some minor issues with spelling, grammar and formatting, but really for your first
submission you should be very proud. I am giving you 4,000 pts for your first effort. If you make any more improvements, or you want to start editing
other articles, then go for it!
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I will go over your entry more carefully now and
award you your points. But at first glance, it looks really good, especially for your first go around. 
