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reply posted on 20-10-2008 @ 01:48 PM by Sublime620
reply to post by budski


Hey! That's my theory in this debate (and this debate only since I don't subscribe to that theory). Shhh




reply posted on 20-10-2008 @ 02:48 PM by schrodingers dog
reply to post by budski


Hey budski welcome back.
Just to give you a heads up, I will be posting my response late this evening.

I have to drive to NYC later this afternoon and I will do it from there.
Thanks to Shock I obviously did no work on it all weekend.


reply posted on 20-10-2008 @ 03:58 PM by budski
reply to post by schrodingers dog


Nice one Sdog - I look forwards to it.

I may even make allowances for your tiredness from all that driving

or not



I was going to say "you're going down" like the "wrestlers" and boxers do.

but given the nature of some of the latest posts in this thread I thought I'd better re-phrase it



[edit on 20/10/2008 by budski]


reply posted on 20-10-2008 @ 05:05 PM by Ian McLean
reply to post by TheWayISeeIt


Here ya are, Twis!



Ya want I should leave the jar?







Just kidding, here ya go... neat, I presume?




reply posted on 20-10-2008 @ 05:20 PM by TheWayISeeIt
reply to post by budski



Be forewarned, I can't drink and clean... it makes me mean.




But I appreciate the whiskey and cherries, thanks Ian. You know how to make a girl feel special.


reply posted on 20-10-2008 @ 09:21 PM by maria_stardust
reply to post by americandingbat


Nicely done!

Cheese tray. Assorted munchies. Blood Orange Mimosa.

The other new fighters could pick up a tip or two from you.




reply posted on 21-10-2008 @ 12:44 AM by TheWayISeeIt
reply to post by maria_stardust


INT. DEBATE PUB CLUB - NIGHT

CLOSE ON - MARIA_STARDUST:

In SLO-MO we SEE the VIXEN, Maria_Stardust, tauntingly exhorting:

MARIA STARDUST

The other new fighters could pick up a tip or two from you.



INT. DEBATE CLUB PUB - NIGHT - SAME TIME

CLOSE ON: TWISI - clutching her BROOM; despairing, desiccated. Her eyes are feverish and confused. BEAT. BEAT.

PULL BACK - WE SEE TWISI as she CRUMPLES, exhausted, falling on the liquor soaked floor.

TWISI
... look at what has happened to this lowly 'fresh-faced fighter'


The CAMERA PANS around the pub lingering briefly on the assorted FIGHTERS who are too busy jockeying for position over DINGBAT'S delicious CHEESE PLATE to care that the latest cheap labor/fresh meat/floor sweeper has fallen:

ANGLE ON: TWISI - WE SEE her from BEHIND as she struggles to clamber up the nearest wall. BEAT. BEAT.


TWISI (O.S) (cont'd)
... in only a ... few hours of... cleaning... up after you... lot ...



Slowly, she begins to TURN -- suspense MUSIC builds -- UNTIL WE SEE:




THE HORROR!!!!!


edits: to improve the quality of this primo dialogue!
[edit on 21-10-2008 by TheWayISeeIt]

[edit on 21-10-2008 by TheWayISeeIt]
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