posted on May, 20 2008 @ 08:06 PM
Hi Sherpa. Thank you for another very interesting contribution to tinWiki! I have just a couple of tips for you when creating pages. If you check the
Recent changes page
, you can see the edits I made to your page. They were just very minor
ones, such as headers and categorizing. I also fixed the links section, again it was just minor formatting, but it is the way we like to format
articles on tinWiki.
One thing though, I read the article, I then skimmed the links. I was able to figure out that the bell was an alleged anti-gravity device, but it
wasn't clear to me from reading your article. Would you mind including a short paragraph on what the bell was supposed to be? I think it would
improve the article immensly. Then again it is always possible that I am not seeing things the way I should!
Also, I see that wikiPedia has seperate entries for Die Glock, and the bell. Do you think we should have two seperate articles for this, or perhaps
just make a redirect page for your page. (I know, I am showing my ignorance on this topic.