Another Freestyle thread?

Damn yo! You should have saved that, # was the planet killer bomb.

Originally posted by ADVISOR
Damn yo! You should have saved that, # was the planet killer bomb.

agreed...

Originally posted by ADVISOR
Damn yo! You should have saved that, # was the planet killer bomb.

Nice ADVISOR. I just thought I'd freestyle a little sumit for all my pals at ATS!

EDIT: planet killer bomb is a sweet title for a song! It can be called that in reference to what will probably end everything the west has. . . .

[Edited on 3/4/2004 by earthtone]

if i give u a topic (any topic) will u drop a freestyle on it?

..................pweety pweeze earthtone?

Originally posted by happyk
..................pweety pweeze earthtone?

if your lyrical juices have stopped flowing...

hey earthtone, that was a pretty phat song you wrote. Didnt need to be rap or anything, it has inter-genre appeal.

Here's my attempt at an ode to the ATS members, i dont think it'll be as good as yours, but ya know, contribution is key:

Socialites, outcasts we all put on the mask
Come to ATS to argue or spit flows to relax
Threads start off on topic but will later detract
So we hire a few mods to keep the # on track
Come to post one day I garantee you'll be back
Because this forum is addictive like a junky needs smack
We got so many threads we keep our servers in stacks
Come with good information or be eatin like snacks
cause bipolar members do not take flak

And it's like that.

[Edited on 3-4-2004 by insite]

Originally posted by insite
hey earthtone, that was a pretty phat song you wrote. Didnt need to be rap or anything, it has inter-genre appeal.

Here's my attempt at an ode to the ATS members, i dont think it'll be as good as yours, but ya know, contribution is key:

Socialites, outcasts we all put on the mask
Come to ATS to argue or spit flows to relax
Threads start off on topic but will later detract
So we hire a few mods to keep the # on track
Come to post one day I garantee you'll be back
Because this forum is addictive like a junky needs smack
We got so many threads we keep our servers in stacks
Come with good information or be eatin like snacks
cause bipolar members do not take flak

And it's like that.

Thanks, I'm glad you digged ma freestylin' brah! You got some skills too man, you rhyme is so true...

i get chronically intoxicated blazin like me and the plant related
damn relax get situated hit the bong lets get faded so high i'm feeling upgraded
persuaded by mary crashing into ya car like I was hali berry
# the law they can't catch us all when things get hairy
cops just scary jealous cause they arent me and you i know they wanna hit this hoota too
cause i got the fat sacks of that boom make me hack like its crack
barfing up lungs trouble breathing coughed and broke my back
never once did I loose sight of your sisters rack during the cannabis cancer attack


lol

Originally posted by Lysergic
i get chronically intoxicated blazin like me and the plant related
damn relax get situated hit the bong lets get faded so high i'm feeling upgraded
persuaded by mary crashing into ya car like I was hali berry
# the law they can't catch us all when things get hairy
cops just scary jealous cause they arent me and you i know they wanna hit this hoota too
cause i got the fat sacks of that boom make me hack like its crack
barfing up lungs trouble breathing coughed and broke my back
never once did I loose sight of your sisters rack during the cannabis cancer attack


lol

nice Lysergic. im gona have a go. my rhymes are a bit cryptic i just take em with a pinch of salt....lets talk about.. my random habits

when i write i abuse margins,
so thin i amuse marvin
my skeletal form
powers my cerebral storms
jiminy cricket compels me to hide
in enemies thickets
im more terribly wicked
than if im selling you rickets
start yelling and ill hack mercilessly with lead pickets
im problematic like 70 whizkids
got dreams in the attic
feel the need
to exceed
and stay static
keeping it sly with the knaves tactics
talk food but i lack it
go to bed at 3
its no hat-trick,
mattress is hard so i seek heather
to sleep better,
but from garden escapades i leave wetter
so broke how i release sweat a
etymology, apologies iv released a new letter

x

lol i jus read mine n realised i was talking babble...
ok...(remember i sing so im rather futile with rappy type things)
my pen and my ink,
my eyes start to sink,
my thoughts stem
crystallize to gems
i�ve spent so long analysing all of them
my turns of the heart
and what my art imparts
change like the seasons
underline my reasons
suffocates my need
toxifies what i breathe
till im in double minds
with troubled eyes
and fal to my doomed demise
my sentence ends with six dots
then some z�s
cos i drift to eternal ease
boy attached on his knees
my face is longer than some centuries
far from heavenly,
i feel that im less than im meant to be
if only i could i get my rent for free
id be set for deeds
rains more present than a day in leeds
if i can ill stay to feed,
to taste a feast, my spirits rise like yeast,
hunger haunts me like a hunted beast
ill succumb alc�hol til im numb,
and devour a thousand treats,
before i start to speech ,
the start is reached,
i thought the start�s the end
and it seems that even though i�ve caught a niche
ill still impeach those
who praise what you preach
i�ll paint a picture it�ll stick like a leech,
cos it�s sick like you when i spiked your quiche(lol)
my mind is cloudy like a day that seems to stay dark
all i want is the blaze spark,
maybe play cards,
i try to save hard,
but stay slaved to the same tasks,
i wear the down-cast clowns frowning face mask
watching the reactions of the downing drowning actors
as they play their fake parts, with snake hearts
they take tarts, but date themselves,
all they rate is wealth, keep it far from stealth
i wish to fly, im high like im wearing rocket vests,
lost my bearing now it seems im not the best
i dot my t�s, cross my eyes,
wonder shall i accept the lies,
doctor jeckle where can i hide?
i hide inside but need insecticide,
im finding lifeforms when i dine,
when asleep they tickle spines,
im spitting simple lines, for those little minds ,
who suffer fickle times in a land of artificial smiles
and superficial sense,
i�ve ten official pence,
the rest is liable for IRS
come repossess
you�ll find your car is tyreless

...oops i got a bit carried away there

*backs slowly out of a room that I never should have walked into*

i agree... this threads bringin out an obscure monotonous rambling side of me... im off to use my energies in a more creative way... i shall continue to read ur freestyles though, but only through non-participant observation x

[Edited on 5-3-2004 by happyk]

Originally posted by Jonna
*backs slowly out of a room that I never should have walked into*

*chuckles*

Wow, my respect for you just plummeted. If you're planning on competing I think it would be unfair if you completely bite chunks out of peoples rhymes



Dude im not competing for # and I was only being sarcastic....I wasnt tryin to come up with my own # i was listening to that while i was reading everyones awful attemps at rapping...

I dont give a god damn what the # your respect is for me insite..

[Edited on 5-3-2004 by McGotti]

Originally posted by McGotti
I dont give a god damn what the # your respect is for me insite..

Good, 'cause it's low. Sorry I took, "completly off the top of my head " literally. And by the way, everything else you wrote besides the Brotha Lynch wasn't exactly grammy winning #.

Originally posted by insite

Originally posted by McGotti
I dont give a god damn what the # your respect is for me insite..

Good, 'cause it's low. Sorry I took, "completly off the top of my head " literally. And by the way, everything else you wrote besides the Brotha Lynch wasn't exactly grammy winning #.

Oh its low now...oh because I was realy worried about your amount of respect for me...Ya..

im sure you feel like a real internet bad ass.. right nerd?

wait, wait......can you hear my balls slappin your chin?








[Edited on 6-3-2004 by McGotti]

cant we all just get along????
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hah! gotti got his card pulled!

beef is hip hop!